Re: improving typography and layout in tutorial.lyx

2016-04-20 Thread John Robert Hudson
Dear mn

Thank you for your feedback but I wonder if you are over-estimating what we 
are trying to do with the example. In the Tutorial 1.2.2, we say:

1.2.2 What you will not find
• Detailed explanations of all of LyX's features.
Look in the User's Guide when you need this.
• Detailed explanations of LaTeX.
Unnecessary. If you want to learn some of the neat tricks you can do with 
LaTeX in LyX, you can have a look at the Embedded Objects manual.

Many of the issues you raise are covered in the User's Guide and other 
manuals.

Note that the Tutorial uses the standard Book document style whereas, in the 
User's Guide and other manuals, we use the KOMA-Script Book document style so 
that we do not introduce too many new ideas all at once in the Tutorial.

John
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On Wednesday 20 Apr 2016 15:35:24 mn wrote:
> Hello.
> 
> The current English tutorial.lyx in rc1 does not yield clean PDFs on
> three levels:
> 
> 1. There are a few minor typographical problems – catched with (builtin)
> chktex.
> En-dashes, footnote-spacing, excess space(~).
> 
> These are hopefully improved upon in the attached .lyx-file.
> 
> (From the existing I deduced that the desired behavior was to conform to
> Bringhurst‘s guide: endash surrounded with spaces.)
> 
> 
> 2. Then there are problems with lines running into the margin:
> 
> These are the following: occuring with default a4-papersize.
> 
> – Exercise: Fix the section and subsection headings in example_raw.lyx.
> 
> – Exercise: Correctly typeset the Quote, LYX-Code, and Verse in
> example_raw.lyx
> 
> —If you want to know more about this document, then see Section .
> 
> These I did not try to fix in the attached file since I didn’t find
> something like a style-guide for LyX-documentation.
> 
> 3. In section 3.2 designating paragraphs deviates (only optically?) from
> the rest of the document in apparently using indention and skips.
> For my own documents I would insert a pagebreak there.
> 
> mn



improving typography and layout in tutorial.lyx

2016-04-20 Thread mn
Hello.

The current English tutorial.lyx in rc1 does not yield clean PDFs on
three levels:

1. There are a few minor typographical problems – catched with (builtin)
chktex.
En-dashes, footnote-spacing, excess space(~).

These are hopefully improved upon in the attached .lyx-file.

(From the existing I deduced that the desired behavior was to conform to
Bringhurst‘s guide: endash surrounded with spaces.)


2. Then there are problems with lines running into the margin:

These are the following: occuring with default a4-papersize.

– Exercise: Fix the section and subsection headings in example_raw.lyx.

– Exercise: Correctly typeset the Quote, LYX-Code, and Verse in
example_raw.lyx

—If you want to know more about this document, then see Section .

These I did not try to fix in the attached file since I didn’t find
something like a style-guide for LyX-documentation.

3. In section 3.2 designating paragraphs deviates (only optically?) from
the rest of the document in apparently using indention and skips.
For my own documents I would insert a pagebreak there.

mn


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