Why GNOME (was gnome app pages)

2006-08-09 Thread Joachim Noreiko

--- Claus Schwarm [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 
 However, I have a draft about the why; reformulated
 from existing
 pages. It's attached. A native English speaker is
 probably able
 to refine the basic idea without problems; I just
 picked the words in
 the headers because of their, well, rhythm.

At first glance this looks good. I like the way points
are laid out.

'It's reliable. Granted.'

'Granted' doesn't mean what you think it does in this
context. It sort of means 'I grudgingly concede your
point' ;)
And 'reliable' is a bit too vague, as we could be
talking about reliability in the sense that gnome
doesn't crash...

This is the sort of thing we should use the wiki for,
as it makes it easy for several people to work on  documents.



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Re: Why GNOME (was gnome app pages)

2006-08-09 Thread Claus Schwarm
On Wed, 9 Aug 2006 11:29:39 +0100 (BST)
Joachim Noreiko [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 
 At first glance this looks good. I like the way points
 are laid out.
 
 'It's reliable. Granted.'
 
 'Granted' doesn't mean what you think it does in this
 context. It sort of means 'I grudgingly concede your
 point' ;)
 And 'reliable' is a bit too vague, as we could be
 talking about reliability in the sense that gnome
 doesn't crash...
 
 This is the sort of thing we should use the wiki for,
 as it makes it easy for several people to work on  documents.
 

I wrote the text over a year ago, together with many other
pages of wgo. This was before we were using the wiki this extensively,
and I used a CVS checkout.

If you like to edit the text in the wiki, move it.


Cheers,
Claus
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