[OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-06

2021-03-30 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Almost Ready

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(1) I noticed in the "qos-classification-policy" there is "l4" support either
TCP or UDP.  It isn't clear if other transport protocols are purposefully not
included.  Should this also support SCTP and/or DCCP, or other transport
protocol numbers in general?  Are the QUIC aspects that might be matched
contained within the UDP fields supported?

(2) Is the allowable MTU another aspect of VPN services that should be able to
be expressed?

(3) ICMP isn't mentioned as an identity type, and I wondered if this should be.



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Re: [OPSAWG] IPR CALL: draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common

2021-03-30 Thread Italo Busi
Hi OPSAWG,

no, I am not aware of any IPR that applies to this draft

Italo

> -Original Message-
> From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) [mailto:jcla...@cisco.com]
> Sent: lunedì 22 marzo 2021 14:33
> To: opsawg@ietf.org
> Subject: [OPSAWG] IPR CALL: draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common
> 
> Authors, contributors, and WG members, as we are in WGLC for this
> document, we want to solicit knowledge of any IPR that may pertain to the
> draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common work.
> 
> Please state either, "no, I am not aware of any IPR that applies to this 
> draft" or,
> "yes, I am aware of IPR that applies this draft".
> 
> If there is IPR, it must be disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules 
> (i.e., RFCs
> 3669, 5378, and 8179).  Please indicate if this has been done.
> 
> If you have any additional details, please share those as well.
> 
> If you are an author or contributor, you must reply to indicate IPR status.
> 
> Joe
> 
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