Re: PESO: Frond

2013-08-11 Thread Aahz Maruch
On Mon, Jul 22, 2013, Bruce Walker wrote:
> On Sun, Jul 21, 2013 at 11:06 PM, Daniel J. Matyola
>  wrote:
>> 
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17468790
>> Comments are invited.

Looks great to me!  Seems to be missing something, though [...] I know,
it needs a rubber ducky.

I might consider reducing shutter speed and aperture for greater DOF,
mainly because of the slightly softened water drop mid-bottom-left
(particularly if you want a larger print size).

> This is an interesting one, Dan. While the graphic elements please me,
> I find the busy background too jarring. Competes with the foreground.
> I think the colour scheme is disharmonious -- that may be what's
> bugging me.

For fans of a certain TV show: purple! green! PURPLE! GREEN!

I kinda see what you mean, but that's not my reaction, and to the extent
that I do share your reaction, it's reduced when I view the larger image
(which foregrounds the frond more).
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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
Thanks, Don.

At your suggestion, I rotated the image 90 degrees.  I still like the
landscape orientation better;  it looks too much like a little tree.
Perhaps my problem is that when I found the fern, the frond was in
landscape orientation, and I remember it that way.

Also, in response to Bruce's comments, I tried to tone done the
background colors a bit.

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On Mon, Jul 22, 2013 at 12:14 PM, Don Guthrie  wrote:
> Feeling a little green ( with envy) after viewing. I did keep turning my
> head. Did you try this in portrait mode?
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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Don Guthrie
Feeling a little green ( with envy) after viewing. I did keep turning my 
head. Did you try this in portrait mode?


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Date: Sun, 21 Jul 2013 23:06:35 -0400
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http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17468790
Comments are invited.

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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread John Sessoms

If you're going to be "cheating", go ahead and bring your own "rain" - take
along a spray bottle of water/glycerin mix and create your own raindrops.

On 7/22/2013 9:56 AM, Daniel J. Matyola wrote:

Thanks for your comments, Bruce.  My reaction was similar.  Through my
view finder, I saw only the patterns of the frond's "leaves," the
texture of the main subject, and the water droplets.  The background
did not register at the time,
  and it came as a surprise when it jumped out at me on my computer screen.

The background is what it is.  I took a few other shots of that fern,
and some had much better backgrounds, but the frond did not look the
way that I wanted.  Perhaps I will go back there after the next rain,
and try again.  I may even resort to cheating, and bring my own
background to place under the frond.  

Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola


On Mon, Jul 22, 2013 at 8:20 AM, Bruce Walker  wrote:

This is an interesting one, Dan. While the graphic elements please me,
I find the busy background too jarring. Competes with the foreground.
I think the colour scheme is disharmonious -- that may be what's
bugging me.

On Sun, Jul 21, 2013 at 11:06 PM, Daniel J. Matyola
 wrote:

http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17468790
Comments are invited.

Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola



PS: "raindrops on roses & whiskers on kittens" works out just fine, but
raindrops on kittens just seems to piss 'em off.

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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
Thanks, Gerrit.  As mentioned in my reply to Bruce's post, I am
considering going back and reshooting it.  I will also look at the
reorientation you suggest.  It is an interesting thought.

Dan Matyola
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On Mon, Jul 22, 2013 at 8:57 AM, Gerrit Visser  wrote:
> I love the waxy look and the drops hanging on.
> Would this work better vertically?
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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
Thanks for your comments, Bruce.  My reaction was similar.  Through my
view finder, I saw only the patterns of the frond's "leaves," the
texture of the main subject, and the water droplets.  The background
did not register at the time,
 and it came as a surprise when it jumped out at me on my computer screen.

The background is what it is.  I took a few other shots of that fern,
and some had much better backgrounds, but the frond did not look the
way that I wanted.  Perhaps I will go back there after the next rain,
and try again.  I may even resort to cheating, and bring my own
background to place under the frond.  

Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola


On Mon, Jul 22, 2013 at 8:20 AM, Bruce Walker  wrote:
> This is an interesting one, Dan. While the graphic elements please me,
> I find the busy background too jarring. Competes with the foreground.
> I think the colour scheme is disharmonious -- that may be what's
> bugging me.
>
> On Sun, Jul 21, 2013 at 11:06 PM, Daniel J. Matyola
>  wrote:
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17468790
>> Comments are invited.
>>
>> Dan Matyola
>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
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RE: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Gerrit Visser
I love the waxy look and the drops hanging on.
Would this work better vertically?

Gerrit

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Re: PESO: Frond

2013-07-22 Thread Bruce Walker
This is an interesting one, Dan. While the graphic elements please me,
I find the busy background too jarring. Competes with the foreground.
I think the colour scheme is disharmonious -- that may be what's
bugging me.

On Sun, Jul 21, 2013 at 11:06 PM, Daniel J. Matyola
 wrote:
> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17468790
> Comments are invited.
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