Re: Alignment issue at 43.10. Trigger Functions

2022-12-02 Thread Daniel Gustafsson
> On 18 Nov 2022, at 07:21, Laurenz Albe  wrote:
> 
> On Thu, 2022-11-17 at 18:14 +, PG Doc comments form wrote:
>> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/plpgsql-trigger.html
>> 
>> Type alignment issue for salary at "Example 43.4. A PL/pgSQL Trigger
>> Function for Auditing":
>> 
>> CREATE TABLE emp_audit(
>> operation char(1)   NOT NULL,
>> stamp timestamp NOT NULL,
>> useridtext  NOT NULL,
>> empname   text  NOT NULL,
>> salary integer
>> );
> 
> Attached is a patch to fix that.

There was a second occurrence of the above, as well as one table which had no
vertical alignment at all.  I fixed these and applied your patch to master.

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Re: Alignment issue at 43.10. Trigger Functions

2022-12-02 Thread Laurenz Albe
On Fri, 2022-12-02 at 11:42 +0100, Daniel Gustafsson wrote:
> 
> I fixed these and applied your patch to master.

Thanks for taking care of this small matter.

Yours,
Laurenz Albe




Re: First Person being used (only occurs in 2 other places in all of documentation)

2022-12-02 Thread Daniel Gustafsson
> On 28 Oct 2022, at 12:50, Daniel Gustafsson  wrote:

> The attached patch rewords the first person form sentences to match the rest 
> of
> the documentation.  The "acknowledgment" sections are left as-is as I believe
> they are free to have a more personal form.
> 
> I also re-arranged the section on PO file editors a bit to keep the PO file
> editor paragraph on editors only and not also contain important translation
> information.

Hearing no objections I've gone ahead and applied this.

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