Re: [Pharo-users] [ANN] Agile Artificial Intelligence: Programming Neural Networks in Pharo

2018-04-21 Thread Alexandre Bergel
Thanks Sean! This is really a great review! 
I owe you one!

Alexandre

> On Apr 21, 2018, at 9:16 PM, Sean P. DeNigris  wrote:
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> abergel wrote
>> Feedback is very welcome.
> 
> Copy edit pass on Chapters 1 & 2:
> https://github.com/AgileArtificialIntelligence/AgileArtificialIntelligence.github.io/pull/2
> 
> A few more observations on Chapter 2 requiring deeper investigation:
> - When you introduce the #assert:equals:, it would be great to show a GT
> debugger with the diff pane at the bottom, which gives a hint at what makes
> Pharo special
> - Capitalized temps in `#digitalComparator:`?! Sacrilege ;-)
> - "Grapher" is introduced as if the reader already knows what that is. Is
> that assumed to be the case?
> 
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> Cheers,
> Sean
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Re: [Pharo-users] [ANN] Agile Artificial Intelligence: Programming Neural Networks in Pharo

2018-04-21 Thread Sean P. DeNigris
abergel wrote
> Feedback is very welcome.

Copy edit pass on Chapters 1 & 2:
https://github.com/AgileArtificialIntelligence/AgileArtificialIntelligence.github.io/pull/2

A few more observations on Chapter 2 requiring deeper investigation:
- When you introduce the #assert:equals:, it would be great to show a GT
debugger with the diff pane at the bottom, which gives a hint at what makes
Pharo special
- Capitalized temps in `#digitalComparator:`?! Sacrilege ;-)
- "Grapher" is introduced as if the reader already knows what that is. Is
that assumed to be the case?



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Cheers,
Sean
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Re: [Pharo-users] [ANN] Agile Artificial Intelligence: Programming Neural Networks in Pharo

2018-04-18 Thread Stephane Ducasse
Since you want feedback, I do not like the section with one paragraph.
It does not like a book but like a doc.
I thought that I set up all the infrastructure for a booklet on IA for
you and I will remove it
since you do not use it.

Stef


On Wed, Apr 18, 2018 at 5:54 PM, Hilaire  wrote:
> Cool. Thanks
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> Le 18/04/2018 à 14:53, Alexandre Bergel a écrit :
>>
>> It is now time to share an early version of a new book.
>> https://agileartificialintelligence.github.io
>
>
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Re: [Pharo-users] [ANN] Agile Artificial Intelligence: Programming Neural Networks in Pharo

2018-04-18 Thread Hilaire

Cool. Thanks


Le 18/04/2018 à 14:53, Alexandre Bergel a écrit :

It is now time to share an early version of a new book.
https://agileartificialintelligence.github.io


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Re: [Pharo-users] [ANN] Agile Artificial Intelligence: Programming Neural Networks in Pharo

2018-04-18 Thread Tudor Girba
Nice :)

Doru


> On Apr 18, 2018, at 2:53 PM, Alexandre Bergel  wrote:
> 
> Hi!
> 
> It is now time to share an early version of a new book. 
> https://agileartificialintelligence.github.io
> 
> Feedback is very welcome.
> 
> Kind regards,
> Alexandre
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