Various other points while re-reading the draft.
*) Non-optional attributes should have
use="required"
in the schema, especially for those not being a string.
*) nitpick
"(e.g. not accepting registrations or applications)the server MUST"
space missing after the parenthesis
*) grammar
"All returned failed
<fee:command> elements that MUST have a <fee:reason> element
detailing the reason for failure, "
"that" should probably be removed there
*)
" When the <transfer> query command has been processed successfully,
the client included the extension in the <login> command service
extensions, and the client is authorized by the server to view
information about the transfer, the server MAY include in the
<extension> section of the EPP response a <fee:trnData> element,"
the part "the client included the extension in the <login> command service
extensions"
reads strange to me on two grounds, this sentence itself and its place in the
whole
block.
I suggest:
" When the <transfer> query command has been processed successfully,
if the client has included this extension in the <login> command service
<svcExtension> element, and if the client is authorized by the server to view
information about the transfer, then the server MAY include in the
<extension> section of the EPP response a <fee:trnData> element,"
--
Patrick Mevzek
p...@dotandco.com
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