Re: [systemd-devel] [PATCH] man: wording and grammar update

[Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek]

On Sat, Jul 13, 2013 at 10:51:35AM +0200, Jan Engelhardt wrote:
> ---
>  man/systemd.cgroup.xml | 30 +++---
>  man/systemd.exec.xml   |  2 +-
>  man/systemd.scope.xml  |  2 +-
>  man/systemd.socket.xml |  2 +-
>  4 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
Applied.

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[systemd-devel] [PATCH] man: wording and grammar update

[Jan Engelhardt]

---
 man/systemd.cgroup.xml | 30 +++---
 man/systemd.exec.xml   |  2 +-
 man/systemd.scope.xml  |  2 +-
 man/systemd.socket.xml |  2 +-
 4 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
index 504c968..e31faf5 100644
--- a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
 and
 
systemd.swap5
 for more information on the specific unit configuration files. The
-execution specific configuration options are configured in the
+execution-specific configuration options are configured in the
 [Slice], [Scope], [Service], [Socket], [Mount], or [Swap]
 sections, depending on the unit type.
   
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
 CPUAccounting=
 
 
-  Turn on the CPU usage accounting for this
+  Turn on CPU usage accounting for this
   unit.
 
   
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
 BlockIOAccounting=
 
 
-  Turn on the Block IO bandwidth accounting
+  Turn on Block IO bandwidth accounting
   for this unit.
 
   
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
 MemoryAccounting=
 
 
-  Turn on the process and kernel memory
+  Turn on process and kernel memory
   accounting for this unit.
 
   
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   the processes executed. Takes an integer value. This
   controls the cpu.shares control group
   attribute, which defaults to 1024. For details about this
-  control group attribute see http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/scheduler/sched-design-CFS.txt";>sched-design-CFS.txt.
 
   Implies CPUAccounting=true.
@@ -145,12 +145,12 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   detects memory contention, memory reclaim will be performed
   until the memory usage is within the "soft" limit. Takes a
   memory size in bytes. If the value is suffixed with K, M, G
-  or T the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes,
+  or T, the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes,
   Megabytes, Gigabytes, or Terabytes (with the base 1024),
   respectively. This controls the
   memory.limit_in_bytes and
   memory.soft_limit_in_bytes control group
-  attributes. For details about these control group attributes
+  attributes. For details about these control group attributes,
   see http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/memory.txt";>memory.txt.
 
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
 blkio.weight
 control group attribute, which
 defaults to 1000. For details about
-this control group attribute see
+this control group attribute, see
 http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt";>blkio-controller.txt.
   
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   blkio.weight_device control group
   attribute, which defaults to 1000. Use this option multiple
   times to set weights for multiple devices. For details about
-  this control group attribute see http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt";>blkio-controller.txt.
 
   
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   specify the device specific bandwidth. The file path may be
   a path to a block device node, or as any other file in which
   case the backing block device of the file system of the file
-  is used.  If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T
+  is used. If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T,
   the specified bandwidth is parsed as Kilobytes, Megabytes,
   Gigabytes, or Terabytes, respectively (Example:
   "/dev/disk/by-path/pci-:00:1f.2-scsi-0:0:0:0 5M"). This
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   blkio.write_bps_device control group
   attributes. Use this option multiple times to set bandwidth
   limits for multiple devices. For details about these control
-  group attributes see
+  group attributes, see
   http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt";>blkio-controller.txt.
   
 
@@ -230,11 +230,11 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
.
   followed by a combination of r,
   w, m to control
   reading, w