Re: iostat.8 wording

[Jason McIntyre]

On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 04:43:19PM +0100, Jason McIntyre wrote:
> On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 04:41:57PM +0200, Jan Stary wrote:
> > I believe this reads a little bit better.
> > 
> > Jan
> > 
> 
> i agree, but i'd leave those commas in.
> jmc
> 

i went ahead and committed your diff, with commas.
jmc

Re: iostat.8 wording

[Jason McIntyre]

On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 04:41:57PM +0200, Jan Stary wrote:
> I believe this reads a little bit better.
> 
>   Jan
> 

i agree, but i'd leave those commas in.
jmc

> Index: iostat.8
> ===
> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/iostat/iostat.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.27
> diff -u -p -r1.27 iostat.8
> --- iostat.8  7 Sep 2018 12:54:44 -   1.27
> +++ iostat.8  15 Sep 2022 14:41:05 -
> @@ -150,8 +150,9 @@ Transfers per second
>  .It MB/s
>  Megabytes transferred per second
>  .El
> -The alternate display format, (selected with
> -.Fl D ) ,
> +.Pp
> +The alternate display format selected with
> +.Fl D
>  presents the following values:
>  .Pp
>  .Bl -tag -width indent -compact
> 

iostat.8 wording

[Jan Stary]

I believe this reads a little bit better.

Jan

Index: iostat.8
===
RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/iostat/iostat.8,v
retrieving revision 1.27
diff -u -p -r1.27 iostat.8
--- iostat.87 Sep 2018 12:54:44 -   1.27
+++ iostat.815 Sep 2022 14:41:05 -
@@ -150,8 +150,9 @@ Transfers per second
 .It MB/s
 Megabytes transferred per second
 .El
-The alternate display format, (selected with
-.Fl D ) ,
+.Pp
+The alternate display format selected with
+.Fl D
 presents the following values:
 .Pp
 .Bl -tag -width indent -compact