we know hut

2005-09-20 Thread Allen Bramhall

here’s surely much

to discuss here

so things sun

get ugly we

stud round milking

the moment thinking

of our special

nurture taut fun

tire you weir

you right down

you’ll find yourself

eventfully culling home

or wit's left

of it when

you do the

surprise shut lawsuit

will seem tepid

like lust week

still we got

together on this

island wearing workbooks

fund opening odd

suns sometimes we

find hut we

need buns soup

beer sometimes just

you nun of worms

the ides of

you coon of

worms comes fund

goes eventually I

will wrestle with

it surely the

others will us

well that’s our

moon exercise after

ullage looking across

the one street

on this island

we develop our

respective world views

oddly we all think

the sum thing

this is our

prism this place

the sun house

token its time

and we hover

token in ours


Re: we know hut

2005-09-20 Thread Alex Jorgensen
don't know how to edit yourself, and I'll say that
without being pretensious--but straight to the point.
It's the littler, littler, wrote littler till just
before finally disappear!

Xiao Yao

--- Allen Bramhall [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 here’s surely much

 to discuss here

 so things sun

 get ugly we

 stud round milking

 the moment thinking

 of our special

 nurture taut fun

 tire you weir

 you right down

 you’ll find yourself

 eventfully culling home

 or wit's left

 of it when

 you do the

 surprise shut lawsuit

 will seem tepid

 like lust week

 still we got

 together on this

 island wearing workbooks

 fund opening odd

 suns sometimes we

 find hut we

 need buns soup

 beer sometimes just

 you nun of worms

 the ides of

 you coon of

 worms comes fund

 goes eventually I

 will wrestle with

 it surely the

 others will us

 well that’s our

 moon exercise after

 ullage looking across

 the one street

 on this island

 we develop our

 respective world views

 oddly we all think

 the sum thing

 this is our

 prism this place

 the sun house

 token its time

 and we hover

 token in ours



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Re: we know hut

2005-09-20 Thread Allen Bramhall

Alex Jorgensen wrote:


don't know how to edit yourself, and I'll say that
without being pretensious--but straight to the point.
It's the littler, littler, wrote littler till just
before finally disappear!

Xiao Yao




I post a lot with the enthusiasm of having done something. this sort of
piece benefits from time. so I agree with you. I'll look at it again
when it is new to me again. I appreciate yours words. I'm a lower case
experimentalist, just trying to get some exercise.

Allen


Re: we know hut

2005-09-20 Thread Alex Jorgensen
Allen,

It's got lots, and surely I'm no final decider of
anything, or maybe anyone else with regards to vision
of what you've to say, your own sense being the truest
golden ear. What I should have said is that when
you've got that, and I understand and appreciate your
comments, you'd have been left with more than many of
us. Glad you're sharing!!

Alex

--- Allen Bramhall [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Alex Jorgensen wrote:

 don't know how to edit yourself, and I'll say that
 without being pretensious--but straight to the
 point.
 It's the littler, littler, wrote littler till just
 before finally disappear!
 
 Xiao Yao
 
 
 
 I post a lot with the enthusiasm of having done
 something. this sort of
 piece benefits from time. so I agree with you. I'll
 look at it again
 when it is new to me again. I appreciate yours
 words. I'm a lower case
 experimentalist, just trying to get some exercise.

 Allen



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