Re: [WSG] Critique please

2004-07-16 Thread Kyle Barrow
Looks good on Safari and validates in the W3C validator. Not a 
validation issue but more contrast between some or your text and 
background colours will improve accessibility.

Cheers
Kyle
On 2004 Jul 16, , at 14:26, Richard Lake wrote:
Could you critique http://www.pricklypair.co.nz for me please. I've 
aimed to
be standards compliant and accessible but I'm sure there's still some 
work
to do in that area.
This is my first PHP/mySQL site and there's still some work to be done
around the ordering area etc, but it works pretty much the way I'd 
designed
it to.
I'd really welcome your comments.
TIA
Richard
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Re: [WSG] Critique please

2004-07-16 Thread Mark Stanton
Hi Richard 

I really like it - maybe three small comments, all very minor:

1) You're using inline styles in a number of places.

2) div id =' footnav' - there is a space in front of a number of
your id attribute values. Not sure how this would affect CSS, JS,
etc..

3) indent is a poor choice for a class name. Describe *why* the data
in presented the way it is, rather than describing the presentation.

9.5 out of 10. Good stuff.

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Re: [WSG] Critique please

2004-07-16 Thread Neerav
Richard
Not bad, If you hadnt told me I wouldnt have known it was a first attempt.
The only 3 problems I found were:
1. http://www.pricklypair.co.nz/contactus.php lets me enter the fullstop 
character for all fields, you need to validate to at least check for an 
@ sign

2. The white bird of paradise photo 
http://pricklypair.co.nz/images/strelnic.jpg is missing

3. When a page/image is not found, a standard 404 error is displayed.
You can customize your server's error message so your users are not 
struck with this unhelpful error by creating a custom 404 error page eg: 
http://www.onlamp.com/pub/a/onlamp/2003/02/13/davidsklar.html

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Richard Lake wrote:
Could you critique http://www.pricklypair.co.nz for me please. I've aimed to
be standards compliant and accessible but I'm sure there's still some work
to do in that area.
This is my first PHP/mySQL site and there's still some work to be done
around the ordering area etc, but it works pretty much the way I'd designed
it to.
I'd really welcome your comments.
TIA
Richard
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[WSG] Critique please

2004-07-15 Thread Richard Lake
Could you critique http://www.pricklypair.co.nz for me please. I've aimed to
be standards compliant and accessible but I'm sure there's still some work
to do in that area.
This is my first PHP/mySQL site and there's still some work to be done
around the ordering area etc, but it works pretty much the way I'd designed
it to.
I'd really welcome your comments.
TIA
Richard


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