RE: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-02 Thread Tom Livingston
Title: RE: [WSG] Siter Review Please


OUCH!

Mr. Meyer has a If you can't say anything nice, don't say
anything at all rule on his list. Is that in effect here as
well??

Perhaps a recommendation to http://webdesign-L.com would have
been nicer...




At 4:42 PM +1100 12/2/04, Cook, Graham R wrote:
In one word - crap!
basic problems include:
...


And that's just a start from a cursory
look







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Subject: [WSG] Siter Review Please

I just want to get some feedback about
aesthetics and design on my site if possible please and also the
funcionality. Yes it is designed in tables but still I would like some
criticism please.

J.LinasDesign
Graphic Designer
http://www.jlinasdesign.com/


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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread matt andrews
On Wed, 1 Dec 2004 21:47:21 EST, [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
  
 I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my site if
 possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed in tables but
 still I would like some criticism please. 
   
 J.LinasDesign
 Graphic Designer
 http://www.jlinasdesign.com/


i don't mean to be rude, but this list is not about aesthetics and
design as such.

why are you submitting an invalid, non-semantic site to the Web Standards Group?

... now, if you were to show this as the before stage of a before
and after demonstration of reworking a site with web standards, that
would be interesting
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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Jlinasdesign


To be honest dude that was not rude at all but that was probably the best suggestion that I have received thus far thank you.

J.LinasDesignGraphic Designerhttp://www.jlinasdesign.com/


Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Nick Gleitzman
On 2 Dec 2004, at 1:47 PM, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my 
site if possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed 
in tables but still I would like some criticism please.
 
J.LinasDesign
Graphic Designer
http://www.jlinasdesign.com/


Your front page contains this:
PSPAN CLASS=boxTextSTRONG CLASS=introTextCourierWHO IS THIS 
GUY?/STRONG /SPANSPAN CLASS=introTextSTRONGBR
WHAT IS J.LINASDESIGN?/STRONG/SPANSPAN 
CLASS=boxTextBR
A designer who believes in quality work produced on a 
budget time. Versatility in both web and print and the willingness to 
go the extra mile to get the job done. /SPAN/P

Not only semantically null tag soup, but neither of the two sentences 
of actual content are grammatically correct. You lost me right there.

Suggest you do some research into this stuff, and code a site that is 
at least an honest attempt to conform to the ethos of what this list is 
about before you ask for a critique.

Try starting with Jeffrey's excellent book 'Designing with Web 
Standards'.

Sorry to be blunt, but you're talking to people who are *always* going 
to look under the hood, here. You need to cut the noise so your signal 
comes through more clearly.

HTH
N
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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Peter Blakey

Jason,

It looks O.K. The navigation presents no major drama. No, I am not sure why you've designed the site, other than self promotion, but is that an issue. I can't and won't comment on the coding - on the basis that the av erage punter doesn't care, so lojng as they don't get lost.

Peter Blakey
Project Officer (On-Line Learning)
Australian Catholic University Limited ABN 15 050 192 660
CRICOS: 4G, 00112C, 00873F, 00885B
1100 Nudgee Road
Banyo Queensland 4014

Telephone: (07) 3623 7421
Facsimile :  (07) 3623 7397
Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]

BEING PRESENT

I am therefore
you are
In the present
Of the present
we are. 

 - GURANU ANJALI
Rtu: Meditation Poems (Amityville, N.Y.: Vajra Printing and Publishing, abridged ed 1995) p.97.

Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Jixor - Stephen I




This is however the WSG mail list so you should comment on the coding.

Peter Blakey wrote:

  Jason,
  
  
  It looks O.K. The navigation
presents no major drama. No, I am not sure why you've designed the
site, other than self promotion, but is that an issue. I can't and
won't comment on the coding - on the basis that the av erage punter
doesn't care, so lojng as they don't get lost.
  
Peter Blakey
Project Officer (On-Line Learning)
Australian Catholic University Limited ABN 15 050 192 660
CRICOS: 4G, 00112C, 00873F, 00885B
1100 Nudgee Road
Banyo Queensland 4014
  
Telephone: (07) 3623 7421
Facsimile :  (07) 3623 7397
Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  
  BEING PRESENT
  
"I am therefore
you are
In the present
Of the present
we are." 
  
- GURANU ANJALI
  Rtu: Meditation Poems (Amityville, N.Y.: Vajra Printing and
Publishing, abridged ed 1995) p.97.




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RE: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Cook, Graham R



In one word - 
crap!
basic problems 
include:

  
  Use of tables
  
  Fonts don't 
  resize
  
  Use of images for textural 
  links
  
  Erroneous map tag in 
  code
  
  Use of one large image for Bio 
  details
  
  No way to get back to home 
  page
  
  Use of serif 
  fonts
  
  No ALT attributes for Branding 
  images
  
  New browser window popup 
  without notification
  
  Re-use of popup window name 
  without testing for existence thus sending popup window in 
  background
  
  No close button on 
  popup
  
  Inconsistencies between link 
  text and ALT text
And that's just a start 
from a cursory look



Graham Cook
Standards Manager - Content IntegrityData  
OnlineTelstra Technology



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[mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of 
[EMAIL PROTECTED]Sent: Thursday, 2 December 2004 1:47 
PMTo: [EMAIL PROTECTED]Subject: [WSG] Siter Review 
Please

I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my site if 
possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed in tables but 
still I would like some criticism please.

J.LinasDesignGraphic Designerhttp://www.jlinasdesign.com/


Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Peter Blakey

Colleagues,

I stand corrected.

Peter Blakey
Project Officer (On-Line Learning)
Australian Catholic University Limited ABN 15 050 192 660
CRICOS: 4G, 00112C, 00873F, 00885B
1100 Nudgee Road
Banyo Queensland 4014

Telephone: (07) 3623 7421
Facsimile :  (07) 3623 7397
Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]

BEING PRESENT

I am therefore
you are
In the present
Of the present
we are. 

 - GURANU ANJALI
Rtu: Meditation Poems (Amityville, N.Y.: Vajra Printing and Publishing, abridged ed 1995) p.97.






Jixor - Stephen I [EMAIL PROTECTED]
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02/12/2004 02:46 PM
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This is however the WSG mail list so you should comment on the coding.

Peter Blakey wrote: 

Jason, 

It looks O.K. The navigation presents no major drama. No, I am not sure why you've designed the site, other than self promotion, but is that an issue. I can't and won't comment on the coding - on the basis that the av erage punter doesn't care, so lojng as they don't get lost.

Peter Blakey
Project Officer (On-Line Learning)
Australian Catholic University Limited ABN 15 050 192 660
CRICOS: 4G, 00112C, 00873F, 00885B
1100 Nudgee Road
Banyo Queensland 4014

Telephone: (07) 3623 7421
Facsimile :  (07) 3623 7397
Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]

BEING PRESENT

I am therefore
you are
In the present
Of the present
we are. 

- GURANU ANJALI
Rtu: Meditation Poems (Amityville, N.Y.: Vajra Printing and Publishing, abridged ed 1995) p.97. 

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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Natalie Buxton
I'm far from the best designer around, but I'll try and give you some
constructive feedback.

1. From a design angle, the page is lovely to look at (see, we can be
nice here!).
2. Using tables for layout is totalyl unnecessary and totally against
what this list is about.
3. Use of spans when you could just style the actual table, tr, td or
p tags etc.
4. Use of br when you used spans - use divs instead to create a break
or use CSS to insert margin/padding
5. Alt text on images that are spacers - they don't need alt text at
all. (Its bad enough that they are used as it is).
6. Tried to check out your hot logo design with images turned off, but
the page tells me nothing about what I would be looking at. Who was
the client? what was the project? were their limitations or awards
involved?


Because you are a graphic designer, and not a web designer I'm not
going to go all our like Graham of Telstra and say Crap. That's
harsh and really not constructive. I also feel your use of serif fonts
is fine, as long as you keep it for headings and never use it for
paragraph text.

HTH

Natalie


On Wed, 1 Dec 2004 21:47:21 EST, [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
  
 I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my site if
 possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed in tables but
 still I would like some criticism please. 
   
 J.LinasDesign
 Graphic Designer
 http://www.jlinasdesign.com/
  


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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Nick Gleitzman
On 2 Dec 2004, at 4:42 PM, Cook, Graham R wrote:
In one word - crap!
Nah, don't stuff around... tell us what you think!
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RE: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Cook, Graham R
So much for harsh criticism.

I must confess Telstra's site is no better, it still uses tables for
layout. However we are addressing this at substantial cost.  One of our
biggest problems though is in dealing with design companies who profess
that they are aware of our standards and accessibility requirement then
go and build sites just like this one.

Web standards is not just a nice to have. These days with the DDA
(Disability Discrimination Act) online requirement it is an essential
cornerstone of web design. IMHO all graphic designers and other
developers who develop for the web, be they coders or not, should attend
a course on web standards and accessible design. 

Graham Cook  

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I'm far from the best designer around, but I'll try and give you some
constructive feedback.

1. From a design angle, the page is lovely to look at (see, we can be
nice here!).
2. Using tables for layout is totalyl unnecessary and totally against
what this list is about.
3. Use of spans when you could just style the actual table, tr, td or p
tags etc.
4. Use of br when you used spans - use divs instead to create a break or
use CSS to insert margin/padding 5. Alt text on images that are spacers
- they don't need alt text at all. (Its bad enough that they are used as
it is).
6. Tried to check out your hot logo design with images turned off, but
the page tells me nothing about what I would be looking at. Who was the
client? what was the project? were their limitations or awards involved?


Because you are a graphic designer, and not a web designer I'm not going
to go all our like Graham of Telstra and say Crap. That's harsh and
really not constructive. I also feel your use of serif fonts is fine, as
long as you keep it for headings and never use it for paragraph text.

HTH

Natalie


On Wed, 1 Dec 2004 21:47:21 EST, [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
  
 I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my 
 site if possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed 
 in tables but still I would like some criticism please.
   
 J.LinasDesign
 Graphic Designer
 http://www.jlinasdesign.com/
  


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Re: [WSG] Siter Review Please

2004-12-01 Thread Terrence Wood
best ren voice
must resist feel a font debate coming on.. serif vs. 
sans-serif. ughh!!! the pain!!!
/best ren voice

My 2 cents about people not really being interested in code. I disagree. 
Totally. Good code for consumers [buzz-word for users not of the elicit 
drug kind, don't know where I picked it up, but man, talk about cool] 
means faster downloads, quicker/better rendering in _any_ UA, which 
means better experience.

Good on you Jason for getting rid of the splash page, but I am wondering 
why you are asking for feedback again when you have not implemented very 
much from the feedback to your post from yesterday? All the feedback 
said your site was pretty. But, your site still does not function any 
better than it did yesterday apart from saving me one click and half a 
minute of my attention sp


Natalie Buxton wrote:
I'm far from the best designer around, but I'll try and give you some
constructive feedback.
1. From a design angle, the page is lovely to look at (see, we can be
nice here!).
2. Using tables for layout is totalyl unnecessary and totally against
what this list is about.
3. Use of spans when you could just style the actual table, tr, td or
p tags etc.
4. Use of br when you used spans - use divs instead to create a break
or use CSS to insert margin/padding
5. Alt text on images that are spacers - they don't need alt text at
all. (Its bad enough that they are used as it is).
6. Tried to check out your hot logo design with images turned off, but
the page tells me nothing about what I would be looking at. Who was
the client? what was the project? were their limitations or awards
involved?
Because you are a graphic designer, and not a web designer I'm not
going to go all our like Graham of Telstra and say Crap. That's
harsh and really not constructive. I also feel your use of serif fonts
is fine, as long as you keep it for headings and never use it for
paragraph text.
HTH
Natalie
On Wed, 1 Dec 2004 21:47:21 EST, [EMAIL PROTECTED]
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
I just want to get some feedback about aesthetics and design on my site if
possible please and also the funcionality. Yes it is designed in tables but
still I would like some criticism please. 
 
J.LinasDesign
Graphic Designer
http://www.jlinasdesign.com/




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