Re: [6tisch] Sheperd's WGLC review for draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-08

Pascal and Diego, thank you very much for your comments. Xavi, let me know what I can help. ThanksQin On Friday, September 29, 2017 8:30 AM, Xavi Vilajosana Guillen wrote: Hi, yes I will do it asap.  thanks Pascal for the comments!!X 2017-09-29 14:12 GMT+02:00

Re: [6tisch] Sheperd's WGLC review for draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-08

All, Let me chime in. See my coments inline. Thanks, Diego 2017-09-29 9:12 GMT-03:00 Thomas Watteyne : > Thanks Pascal for the feedback. @Xavi, would you have a second to turn > those suggestions into issue on the bitbucket repo? > > On

Re: [6tisch] Sheperd's WGLC review for draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-08

Hi, yes I will do it asap. thanks Pascal for the comments!! X 2017-09-29 14:12 GMT+02:00 Thomas Watteyne : > Thanks Pascal for the feedback. @Xavi, would you have a second to turn > those suggestions into issue on the bitbucket repo? > > On Fri, Sep 29, 2017 at 12:31

[6tisch] Sheperd's WGLC review for draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-08

Dear authors: All in all, I think the document is ready but believe that a pass on language from a native person may help. Also, the document should include a terminology where all the terms are defined, e.g. NumCandidates and so on. Still, Please find my comments, with a [PT] tag associated