Excellent, thanks!
On 1/16/20, 5:03 PM, "Michael Richardson" wrote:
Tim Evens via Datatracker wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e WG
of the IETF.
Title : IEEE 802.15.4 Information Element encapsulation of
6TiSCH Join and Enrollment Information
Tim Evens via Datatracker wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
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Thank
Yoav,
Thank you for your feedback. I will add that line on the next
version.
Regards,
Diego Dujovne
Le jeu. 16 janv. 2020 à 15:03, Yoav Nir via Datatracker
a écrit :
> Reviewer: Yoav Nir
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> The draft is short and to the point
Reviewer: Yoav Nir
Review result: Has Nits
The draft is short and to the point and easy to understand. The security
considerations (and privacy considerations!) sections are well written and
cover everything. I'm just missing one clause.
The first paragraph reads:
All of the contents of
