Dear Adam, thanks so much for your comments. Find inline (XV:) our responses.
All changes will be published in the upcoming version of the draft. many thanks for your review. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks to everyone who worked on this document. I have a handful of minor, > editorial suggestions. > > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > Please expand TSCH and 2TiSCH in the Abstract. > > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > §3.1.1: > > > 5. The SF running on node B selects 2 out of the 3 cells from the > > CellList of the 6P ADD Request. Node B locks those cells in it > > nit: "its" > > > schedule until the transmission is successfull (i.e. node B > > nit: "successful" > XV: corrected. Thanks. > > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > §3.3.1: > > > be used), or partially succeed (less than NumCells cells from the > > Nit: "fewer than" rather than "less than." > > XV: corrected. Thanks. > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > §3.3.2: > > > o The CellList in a 6P Request (2-step transaction) or 6P Response > > (3-step transaction) MUST either be empty, contain exactly > > NumCells cells, or more than NumCells cells. The case where the > > CellList is not empty but contains less than NumCells cells is not > > supported. > > nit: "...fewer than..." > > It would be a good idea to clearly indicate what a recipient of a message > with a > non-empty CellList with fewer entries than NumCells requires should do. > This is > also applicable for the "Candidate CellList" for RELOCATE. I can't find > equivalent language for ADD -- is it okay for a message to (for example) > have a > NumCells value of 3, but include only 2 cells in its CellList? > > XV: Thanks for this comment. Other reviewers also pointed out this issue. We suggest to add this sentence: "The case where the CellList is not empty but contains fewer than NumCells cells is not supported. RC_ERR_CELLLIST code MUST be returned when the CellList contains fewer than NumCells cells. " > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > §3.3.3: > > > verification on Candidate CellList can succeed (NumCells cells from > > the Candidate CellList can be used), fail (none of the cells from the > > Candidate CellList can be used) or partially succeed (less than > > NumCells cells from the Candidate CellList can be used). In all > > > nit: "...fewer than..." > > XV: corrected. Thanks. > ------------------------------------------------------------ > --------------- > > §3.3.5: > > > MaxNumCells: The maximum number of cells to be listed. Node B MAY > > return less than MaxNumCells cells, for example if MaxNumCells > > cells do not fit in the frame. > > nit: "...fewer than..." > > > If node B has less than Offset cells that match the request, node B > > returns an empty CellList and a Code field set to RC_EOL. > > nit: "...fewer than..." > > > XV: corrected. Thanks. > _______________________________________________ > 6tisch mailing list > 6tisch@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch > -- Dr. Xavier Vilajosana Wireless Networks Lab *Internet Interdisciplinary Institute (IN3)Professor* (+34) 646 633 681 xvilajos...@uoc.edu <usu...@uoc.edu> http://xvilajosana.org http://wine.rdi.uoc.edu Parc Mediterrani de la Tecnologia Av Carl Friedrich Gauss 5, B3 Building 08860 Castelldefels (Barcelona). Catalonia. Spain [image: Universitat Oberta de Catalunya]
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