On 24/10/2018 22:49, Mike Jones wrote:
3.1, 3.2, and 4.1, parameter definitions: None of these parameter
definitions specify the syntax of the parameters defined, making
understanding these quite confusing. Yes, this is talked about later in
the doc but there are not even forward references
Hi Peter,
Thanks a lot for this detailed review! We have uploaded a new version that
includes (most of) your
comments:https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-palombini-ace-key-groupcomm-02
Detailed replies and some questions inline (see FP in red below).
Thanks,
Francesca
From: Ace
Hi Jim,
Thanks a lot for your detailed review, as you might have seen we have included
most comments in the latest version:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-palombini-ace-key-groupcomm-02
Please note that this version includes also review comments from Peter, which
in some cases overlapped,