Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Dear Murray, Got it - I realise I wasn't clear with SHOULD - indeed the implementer has limited discretion on what can happen: send the DISCONNECT, close connection or drop the connection. I will discuss this with Ben but am happy to add the additional text about dropping the connection. Kind

Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
Hi Cigdem, On Thu, Mar 10, 2022 at 12:54 AM Cigdem Sengul wrote: > Thank you for your review. Our thinking was as Ben explained. > In the draft, we used MUST/MUST NOT for the behaviour that affected > security, and SHOULD for desired behaviour. > This doesn't match my understanding of how BCP

Re: [Ace] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Cigdem! Thanks for the quick response. The clarifications and proposed edits listed below address my feedback. Roman From: Cigdem Sengul Sent: Thursday, March 10, 2022 7:33 AM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: The IESG ; draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-prof...@ietf.org; ace-cha...@ietf.org; Ace Wg ; Daniel

Re: [Ace] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Hello Francesca, Thank you. I welcome these suggestions - I do not foresee other permission keywords looking at the MQTT vocabulary (control packets); happy to "hard-code" "pub" and "sub". If there aren't any other opinions, I will implement them this way. There are a few other minor

Re: [Ace] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Francesca Palombini
Hi Cigdem, Thank you for the quick reply! The two additional registrations for the parameters Toid and Tperm look good, although I have a couple of suggestions: 1. For Toid I would add a reference to Section 1.3 (and maybe capitalize Topic Filter, just to be nitpicking). I would also

Re: [Ace] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Dear Roman, Thank you for your comments. I tried to respond to them inline below. (I have made fixes here: https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/104 ) On Tue, 8 Mar 2022 at 23:02, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker wrote: > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for >

[Ace] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to

Re: [Ace] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Hello Francesca, Thank you for your feedback. My response is below. On Thu, 10 Mar 2022 at 10:03, Francesca Palombini via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: Discuss > > When responding,

Re: [Ace] Robert Wilton's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Carsten, Please see inline ... > -Original Message- > From: iesg On Behalf Of Carsten Bormann > Sent: 08 March 2022 21:12 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) > Cc: logana...@gmail.com; ace-cha...@ietf.org; The IESG ; > draft-ietf-ace-...@ietf.org; ace@ietf.org > Subject: Re: Robert Wilton's

[Ace] Francesca Palombini's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please

Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-aif-06: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Carsten Bormann
Hi Murray, thank you for this review. I’m currently collecting updates into https://github.com/cabo/ace-aif until the ID submission opens again. > On 2022-03-10, at 05:14, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker > wrote: > > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for >

[Ace] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Francesca Palombini via Datatracker
Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.)

Re: [Ace] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2022-03-10 Thread Cigdem Sengul
Hello Murray, Thank you for your review. Our thinking was as Ben explained. In the draft, we used MUST/MUST NOT for the behaviour that affected security, and SHOULD for desired behaviour. Would the following revision make it more clear: "The Broker MUST NOT forward messages to unauthorized