Hi Jim,
Thanks a lot for your detailed review, as you might have seen we have included
most comments in the latest version:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-palombini-ace-key-groupcomm-02
Please note that this version includes also review comments from Peter, which
in some cases overlapped,
* Section 2 - client - write rights and/or read rights. Unless you think
that write implies read in which case you should state that
* Section 2 - KDC - should also say what it does in the later parts -
* Section 2 - Dispatcher - If this is a bus, then you are not really
communicating with it