On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
Sent: Saturday, February 16, 2019 2:56 PM
To: draft-ietf-ace-coap-...@ietf.org
Cc: ace@ietf.org
Subject: [Ace] Shepard comments draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-08
1. In section 10.1 the last sentence of the first paragraph and the first
sentence of the last paragraph duplicate each
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What do you think? Does it address your two comments 4 and 5?
Rgs,
Panos
-----Original Message-----
From: Ace On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
Sent: Saturday, February 1
Hi Jim,
thanks for the review.
see below.
Peter
Jim Schaad schreef op 2019-02-16 20:55:
> 1. In section 10.1 the last sentence of the first paragraph and the first
> sentence of the last paragraph duplicate each other. This should be cleaned
> up.
>
> removed the 2nd instance
>
> 2.
1. In section 10.1 the last sentence of the first paragraph and the first
sentence of the last paragraph duplicate each other. This should be cleaned
up.
2. Correct the grammar in the first sentence of section 10.2 - s/registers
a new/registers new/
3. The correct example DNS name is
