Re: [Acme] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-tls-alpn-06

2019-10-01 Thread Roland Shoemaker
Hey Martin, Thanks for the thorough review, I agree with all of the suggestions and will be incorporating the changes into the next revision. Following up on one point about Section 7, I believe you may actually be thinking about another issue we had with the http-01 ACME challenge. The issue

[Acme] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-tls-alpn-06

2019-09-17 Thread Martin Thomson via Datatracker
Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review result: Ready with Nits This is a clear description of a simple protocol that addresses a well-defined problem. I didn't find any real issues, though I have some suggestions that might improve the document a little. My view is that publication without these would