[alto] One more review for draft draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang

Please find below comments from my latest review of the doc draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang. No major blockers from my side, mainly some comments on definitions, semantics, and nits. Many thanks. Jordi * Definitions: - (1) In Section 4.4., the following terms are introduced for the

Re: [alto] Another review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07

Hi Shenshen, Many thanks for your review comments. Please see my response inline. Thanks, Jensen On Sat, May 20, 2023 at 6:05 PM Shenshen Chen wrote: > Hi, all > > I wrote a review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07, following the call for > volunteers from Jordi. > Since I am not confident

Re: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07

Hi Dong, Many thanks for your review. Please see my response inline. Thanks, Jensen On Fri, May 19, 2023 at 11:33 PM wrote: > Dear ALTOers and authors of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang, > > Below is my review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07. > > Since I'm new to ALTO, please consider my review

[alto] Another review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07

Hi, all I wrote a review for draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-07, following the call for volunteers from Jordi. Since I am not confident with my comments, please feel free to ignore them. The following comments are started with the related part of the draft. 1. The whole draft It confuses me if this