From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zh...@gmail.com>
Sent: 26 October 2023 12:46
To: tom petch
Cc: draft-ietf-alto-oam-y...@ietf.org; alto@ietf.org; Martin Duke
Subject: Re: alto-oam-org

Hi Tom,

Many thanks for following up on this document. Sorry to miss the issues.

We have fixed them in 
https://github.com/ietf-wg-alto/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/pull/100 and will 
merge the changes to the next revision.

<tp>
Right, I will have  a look.

I note that the IESG review had produced two DISCUSS which will also produce 
changes so I am unsure of the process here.  You should not change things which 
the IESG would no longer approve of but I do not know what they are!  Then the 
use of a non-documentation address usually produces a response from Transport 
ADs which it has not on this occasion.  I think that the process is that this 
is now under the control of the responsible AD.

Tom Petch




Thanks,
Jensen


On Thu, Oct 26, 2023 at 7:25 PM tom petch 
<ie...@btconnect.com<mailto:ie...@btconnect.com>> wrote:
I commented on this I-D 25sep23.

I got a response from the document shepherd which addressed two of my points 
but not the others.  I never got a response from an author.

I note that -15 still has issues that I raised.  Two I notice are:

RFC9274 is in the text but not in the I-D References
172.17.0.2 is in the examples seemingly as an IP address but I do not see this 
in the list of documentation addresses

HTH (I see that today is IESG review day!)

Tom Petch
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