Thanks Brian
MichaelR just made the excellent suggestion during the BRSKI call to change the
reference to the URL of the presentation that included te slide from IETF
proceeding - which i think are considered to be ver stable.
I'll finish the shepherd review template and include this point in any
leftover formal requests that i may find for another rev before it goes to Rob
(but i think/hope there should be no others).
Cheers
Toerless
On Fri, Mar 24, 2023 at 09:11:07AM +1300, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> I have insufficient security expertise to review the details of this draft,
> but it seems to be complete and well written.
>
> Section 4.2 "Message Exchange" refers to a diagram stored on GitHub in PNG
> format. It's a nice diagram, but I think that it's a bad idea to embed a
> GitHub URL in an RFC. This may be too much to ask, but an overview diagram in
> the same format as Figure 2 would be great.
>
> Regards
> Brian Carpenter
>
> On 20-Mar-23 21:45, Sheng JIANG wrote:
> > Dear ANIMAers,
> >
> > This message starts the two-week (*) ANIMA Working Group Last Call to
> > advance draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-04, which defines an enhancement of
> > Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructure (BRSKI, RFC 8995) that
> > supports alternative certificate enrollment protocols.
> >
> > This document's intended status is Standards Track. At present, there is no
> > IPR filed against this document. This document has been ANIMA WG document
> > since July, 2020 (with name draft-ietf-anima-brski-async-enroll at that
> > time. It renamed after 5 updates April 2022.) and has received a lot of
> > feedback from the WG and work from its authors. The authors therefore think
> > is ready for WGLC. Please send your comments by April 3rd 2023. If you do
> > not feel this document should advance, please state your reasons why.
> > Toerless Eckert is the assigned document shepherd.
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > Sheng for the chairs
> >
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