[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9747 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Xiao Min via auth48archive
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[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9749 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread RFC Editor via auth48archive
Daniel, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6) 7) 8) 9) 10) 11) 12) 13) Thank you. RFC Editor/rv On Mar 5, 2025, at 5:17 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-edi

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9757 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Fangsheng via auth48archive
I approve the publication of this document -Original Message- From: Alanna Paloma [mailto:apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org] Sent: Wednesday, March 5, 2025 8:26 AM To: John Scudder ; Aijun Wang ; bhassa...@yahoo.com; Fangsheng ; Tanren ; zhu.ch...@zte.com.cn Cc: RFC Editor ; pce-ads ; p

[auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9749 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread RFC Editor via auth48archive
*IMPORTANT* Updated 2025/03/05 RFC Author(s): -- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are sever

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9692 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Alanna Paloma via auth48archive
Hi Tony, Thank you for your review and reply. The files have been updated accordingly, and we have noted your approval. FYI - To reflect your suggested update to similar text, we have also updated the text below. Please let us know of any objections. Previous: then CLEANUP, PUSH UpdateZTPOffe

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9744 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Sarah Tarrant via auth48archive
Hi Ali, Gunter, and Matthew, Thank you for your replies. Ali - Thank you for the new proposed text. Gunter - Thank you for your approval of Ali's proposed text. Matthew - Are there any objections to Ali's proposed text and document updates? We ask because Ali wrote: > Hi Sarah, if no objecti

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9744 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Ali Sajassi (sajassi) via auth48archive
Thanks Gunter! Sarah, can you please update the draft based on the proposed text. Thanks very much, Ali From: Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) Date: Wednesday, March 5, 2025 at 12:09 AM To: Ali Sajassi (sajassi) , Matthew Bocci (Nokia) , Sarah Tarrant , Ali Sajassi (sajassi) Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-ed

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9743 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
Hi Gorry, Thanks for sending this along. We have added this change to our versions of the files (see below). Please review our update (as your description of the update was to change one word but the “New” text actually changed more than one word) and let us know if any further updates are

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9756 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Alanna Paloma via auth48archive
Hi Authors, Thank you to Dhruv for confirming the AUTH48 changes. We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9756 Thank you for your attention and guidance during the AUTH48 process. We will move this document forward in the p

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9757 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Alanna Paloma via auth48archive
Hi Aijun and John, Thank you for your replies. The files have been updated accordingly. > On Mar 4, 2025, at 6:37 PM, Aijun Wang wrote: > > One minor question, should the table 4 in > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9757.html#section-13.4add another > column, to point also to RFC 9757?

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Mahesh Jethanandani via auth48archive
Thanks, Joe, for working through all the comments. There is one item that was missed, and a couple of updates. See inline. > On Mar 5, 2025, at 5:45 AM, Joe Clarke (jclarke) wrote: > > Thank you for the attention, RFC Ed! Let me go through your comments below. > > 1) > > [JMC] I do not thi

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9743 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Gorry Fairhurst via auth48archive
I was performing a final check and noted one mistake by me that needs to be corrected (so sorry). ORIGINAL (as sent to RFC-Ed): A congestion control algorithm shouldtry to avoid causing excessively high rates of packet loss. CURRENT (as suggested by me): A congestion control algorithm ought

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke) via auth48archive
Thank you for the attention, RFC Ed! Let me go through your comments below. 1) [JMC] I do not think we need any additional keywords. What we have in terms of “syslog” and “yang data model” seem descriptive enough to find this. 2) [JMC] Good with this. 3) [JMC] I did not see anything

[auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9747 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread RFC Editor via auth48archive
*IMPORTANT* Updated 2025/03/04 RFC Author(s): -- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are sever

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9756 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Dhruv Dhody via auth48archive
Hi Alanna, I have verified the AUTH48 changes and it is ready to be published! Thanks! Dhruv On Wed, Mar 5, 2025 at 4:04 AM Alanna Paloma wrote: > Hi Adrian and Dhruv, > > Thank you for your replies. We have updated the files accordingly. We > note that you have both sent your approvals; howe

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9676 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear) via auth48archive
On 20.02.2025 22:18, ENRICO FRANCESCONI wrote: Dear Madison and Eliot,    we were preparing an answer to the previous message, when we received two new emails of yours. We report in the following our reply which partially addresses the issue on Hebrew characters you underline in your message.

[auth48] Re: [AD] [C507] AUTH48 Questions: RFC-to-be 9665 and RFC-to-be 9664

2025-03-05 Thread Ted Lemon via auth48archive
Sounds good. See you there! On Wed, Mar 5, 2025, at 7:33 AM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) wrote: > Ted, > > The next steps sound logical to me. Let’s check at IETF-122 for the WG > consensus about the last changes, but until now: no reactions on the DNSSD > mailing list. > > Regards > > -éric >

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9744 for your review

2025-03-05 Thread Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) via auth48archive
Ali, Thanks. This sounds good to me, and approved. It describes the failure impacts more accurately. G/ From: Ali Sajassi (sajassi) Sent: Wednesday, March 5, 2025 4:44 AM To: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) ; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) ; Sarah Tarrant ; Ali Sajassi (sajassi) Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-edit