Re: [bess] Slot requests for BESS WG session - IETF 102 - Montreal

2018-06-12 Thread Mankamana Mishra (mankamis)
Hi Stephane,
I would need 5 min slot  for “Per multicast flow Designated Forwarder Election 
for EVPN”. It was first presented in London. Now we have implementation and 
making some modification to draft. Would like to give quick update and request 
for working group adoption call.

Thanks
Mankamana

From: BESS  on behalf of "stephane.litkow...@orange.com" 

Date: Tuesday, June 12, 2018 at 3:13 AM
To: "bess@ietf.org" 
Subject: [bess] Slot requests for BESS WG session - IETF 102 - Montreal


All,



It is time we start building the BESS WG agenda for Montreal.



Please send us your request for a presentation slot, indicating draft name, 
speaker, and desired duration (covering presentation and discussion). If it is 
not the first presentation of the draft, please give a reason why it is 
required to have a new presentation slot.





Thank you



Stephane & Matthew




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[bess] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery-00.txt

2018-06-12 Thread internet-drafts


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS WG of the IETF.

Title   : Fast Recovery for EVPN DF Election
Authors : Ali Sajassi
  Gaurav Badoni
  Dhananjaya Rao
  Patrice Brissette
  John Drake
  Jorge Rabadan
Filename: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-fast-df-recovery-00.txt
Pages   : 19
Date: 2018-06-12

Abstract:
   Ethernet Virtual Private Network (EVPN) solution [RFC 7432] describes
   DF election procedures for multi-homing Ethernet Segments. These
   procedures are enhanced further in [DF-FRAMEWORK] by applying Highest
   Random Weight Algorithm for DF election in order to avoid DF status
   unnecessarily upon a failure. This draft makes further improvement to
   DF election procedures in [DF-FRAMEWORK] by providing two options for
   fast DF election upon recovery of the failed link or node associated
   with the multi-homing Ethernet Segment. This fast DF election is
   achieved independent of number of EVIs associated with that Ethernet
   Segment and it is performed via a simple signaling between the
   recovered PE and each PE in the multi-homing group.



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[bess] Shepherd review on draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-04

2018-06-12 Thread Mach Chen
Hi authors,

I was asked by the BESS WG chair to shepherd this document. Here are my review 
comments.

In summary, the idea is straightforward and clear, but the text need some 
clean-up and enhancements to make the document more readable, hence to reduce 
the confusion.  There are also some potential issues need to be addressed 
before publication. 

Below are some specific comments:

1. 
Idnits tool shows there are some 2119 language warning that needs to be 
addressed.

2. 
Please expand the acronyms (e.g., VPLS, PW, NLRI., etc.) when first use. 

3. 
Since this document updates the meaning of the "control flags" fields inside 
the "layer2 info extended community" defined RFC4761, the Abstract and 
Introduction sections should have some text to state this. E.g., "This document 
updates RFC4761. "

4. 
Section 2, s/ off multiple/of multiple/, 
And the following sentence is hard to parse, it's better to do a re-writing 
here.
" The behavior required off the multiple PEs identified
   by the NLRI indicates the VPLS label they should use in the VPLS
   traffic being forwarded to this PE."

5.
Section  2, Second Paragraph,

"[RFC4761] requires that if the advertising PE sets the C and S bits,
   the receiving PE MUST honor the same by inserting control word (CW)
   and by including sequence numbers respectively."

My understanding of "Honor the same" is that the receiving PE MUST set the C 
and S bits. But obviously, you intend to say something else. Maybe you could 
just directly say as below:

"[RFC4761] requires that if the advertising PE sets the C and S bits,  when 
forwarding VPLS traffic to the PE, the receiving PE MUST insert control word 
(CW) and include sequence numbers respectively. "

6. 
Section2, the third paragraph,
Remove the "the VPLS BGP NLRI" or add more clarification text.

" Thus, the behavior of BGP VPLS needs to be further specified." This sentence 
is too general,  how about:
" Thus, the behavior of processing CW and sequencing needs to be further 
specified."

7.
 Section 3.2

s/Current BGP VPLS implementation/ Current BGP VPLS specification

8. 
Section 3.2,
s/with the sequence numbers as well/with  sequence numbers as well

9.
 Section 3.2,

"If the PEs at both
   ends of the PW do not agree on the setting of the S-bit, the PW
   SHOULD NOT come up at all."

Seems this is different from the process of CW, is this the intention?


10. 
Section 4,

It suggests to use two P2MP LSPs to deliver VPLS frames with/without CW and/or 
sequence.  But for a specific PE, there will be 4 possibilities: 

CW   Sequence
Y   Y
Y   N
N  Y
N  N

Correspondingly, it seems that 4 LSPs needs, am I right?  If so, how do the two 
LSP cover the 4 situations?

11 
Section 5 and Section 6 talk how to apply the new treatment defined in this 
document to the multi-homing scenario.  Seems no need put them into different 
sections. I'd suggest to merge the section and simplify the description. 
Because most of the context belong to the problem statement and has been stated 
in the problem section.  You move some text to the problem section.

In addition, for the multi-homing scenario, it allows the backup and primary 
PWs having different C and S treatment, is it the intention.  

12.

I believe that the current "Security Considerations"  is too simple and cannot 
pass the IESG evaluation, the authors need to expand this section.

BTW, the IANA section just list "none" seems too simple as well:-), add more 
words would improve the completeness of the document. 


Best regards,
Mach 

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