Adam,
Thank you for reviewing.

We expanded the terminology section. Should be better now.
Thanks.
Jorge

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From: Adam Roach <a...@nostrum.com>
Date: Thursday, May 10, 2018 at 7:57 AM
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Subject: Adam Roach's No Objection on 
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisement-10: (with COMMENT)
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Resent-Date: Thursday, May 10, 2018 at 7:57 AM

    Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisement-10: No Objection
    
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    COMMENT:
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    The density of unexpanded acronyms makes this document particularly 
challenging
    to read. Please expand the following acronyms upon first use and in the 
title;
    see https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt for guidance.
    
     - EVPN
     - NVO
     - MAC
     - VXLAN
     - nvGRE
     - PE
     - TOR
     - IP-VPN
     - VM
     - ESI
     - NLRI
     - VTEP
     - VSID
     - ES
     - AD
     - GPE
     - sBD
     - DA
     - ABR
     - CE
    
    
    


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