Adam, Thank you for reviewing. We expanded the terminology section. Should be better now. Thanks. Jorge
-----Original Message----- From: Adam Roach <a...@nostrum.com> Date: Thursday, May 10, 2018 at 7:57 AM To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> Cc: "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisem...@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisem...@ietf.org>, Zhaohui Zhang <zzh...@juniper.net>, "aretana.i...@gmail.com" <aretana.i...@gmail.com>, "bess-cha...@ietf.org" <bess-cha...@ietf.org>, "zzh...@juniper.net" <zzh...@juniper.net>, "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org> Subject: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisement-10: (with COMMENT) Resent-From: <alias-boun...@ietf.org> Resent-To: <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>, <wim.henderi...@nokia.com>, <jdr...@juniper.net>, <w...@juniper.net>, <saja...@cisco.com> Resent-Date: Thursday, May 10, 2018 at 7:57 AM Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisement-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-prefix-advertisement/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The density of unexpanded acronyms makes this document particularly challenging to read. Please expand the following acronyms upon first use and in the title; see https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt for guidance. - EVPN - NVO - MAC - VXLAN - nvGRE - PE - TOR - IP-VPN - VM - ESI - NLRI - VTEP - VSID - ES - AD - GPE - sBD - DA - ABR - CE _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess