Dear Glenn,
Thank you very much for your comprehensive review.
I will reflect these comments to the next revision.
Best regards,
-- tsuno
2018-05-17 17:58 GMT+07:00 Glenn Mansfield Keeni :
> Hi Tsunoda,
>I have completed a pass of the document. The document
> is shaping
Hi Tsunoda,
I have completed a pass of the document. The document
is shaping up well.Once again thanks for the good work.
The comments follow. I would also recommend a closer check
for editorial nits in the next draft.
Glenn
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draft:
Hi Glenn,
Thanks a lot for your review.
I am going to revise the MIB part along with your comments
and get back to you hopefully soon.
-- tsuno
2018-05-13 18:56 GMT+09:00 Glenn Mansfield Keeni :
> Hi Tsunoda,
>I have done a review of the MIB. The comments follow.
> Glenn