Hey there.

Here's a couple of things I noticed with the book, and *very* coincidentally they go hand in hand in terms of my bringing this up.

First off there's a typo (or two? I'm noticing stuff as I go) on the new BLFS Wiki page:

The name of the page is 'BLFS WiKi', but I don't think the second 'k' needs capitalized. See: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiki

Next, there is this line of text:

"Suggestions to change the book should be made by creating a new ticket,
not by making comments inthe WiKi."
                         ^
Lastly, (and I'm not going to argue on this, it's just my opinion, so do with it as you please) there is a section in the thunderbird page that uses some odd formatting. The word 'not' is stressed, but in my opinion, overly so, or at least, in a way that looks unprofessional. It looks as if we're shouting at the reader.

Compare please:

http://linuxfromscratch.org/~jhuntwork/Screenshot-1.png
(Notice the italicized use of 'not' here, which is more professional looking)
with
http://linuxfromscratch.org/~jhuntwork/Screenshot-2.png

I understand the desire to make that point stand out, but I would think there's a better way of doing it. One that doesn't look like shouting. :) Anyway, like I said, a couple of minor points.

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JH
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