Thanks for catching these!
I applied most of the changes. See below (nitpicking ahead!).
Andreas Enge andr...@enge.fr skribis:
--- guix.alt/doc/guix.texi2012-12-11 21:53:49.0 +0100
+++ guix/doc/guix.texi2012-12-11 22:20:49.0 +0100
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
@cindex package store
The result of package build functions is @dfn{cached} in the file
system, in a special directory called the @dfn{package store}. In
-practice, each package is installed in a directory of its own, in the
+practice, each package is installed in a subdirectory of its own in the
A sub-directory is also a directory. Saying that it’s under /nix/store
should make the “sub” part clear, IMO.
-scripts, etc. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a
+scripts, etc.. This direct correspondence allows users to make sure a
I think the two periods would look odd, typographically.
-Primarily, @var{options} specify the operations to be performed during
+Primarily, @var{options} specifies the operations to be performed during
A trick meant to be equivalent to “the options listed in @var{options}”.
Thanks!
Ludo’.