Just a few notes (since you put it in jobs-talk).

Uday Reddy wrote:
> Dear Hiring Manager,

Human Resources. No manager has the title "Hiring Manager". :)

> I have Over 

Over should be lowercase.

> 12 years of IT experience in IT

Redundant. I would expect your IT experience would be in IT and not in 
animal husbandry.

> out of which 8 yrs

Spell out the full word. Not putting the "ea" seems like you are one of 
those "leet" people. :)

> in Cold fusion applications. 

"out of which 8 years in ColdFusion applications".... what. You just 
drop off.

"out of which 8 years were designing ColdFusion applications" is much 
better.

Also, It's ColdFusion. Not Cold fusion. I know personally, if someone 
separates it into 2 words, I suspect that they haven't been doing it for 
very long. But that's just me.


> Extensively used Cold Fusion 4/5/MX/7, Java

Just to be clear, you mean Java and not Javascript. Right? The language 
you write applications with? Impressive, but I wouldn't think you needed 
Java to do CF Applications. But I may be wrong.

>, JSP, MS Access, MS SQL Server, Oracle, DB2, HTML

It's assumed that if you do CF, you also do HTML.

, Java Script and CSS.
> Experience in full life cycle of application development ranging from user 
> interaction, analysis, design, development, testing, implementation and 
> production support. 
> Designed and implemented high volume, heavy data critical projects. 
> Experienced in AJAX, XML.
> Experienced in MVC,Gesture Handler,Model Glue etc design patterns.

Not design patterns, "Frameworks". :)

> Solid team player with good communication skills. I am hard working and 
> flexible in working with large teams. I am a quick learner and can train 
> others.
> 
> I have Bachelors in Engineering, presently pursuing Masters in Software 
> Engineering. Over the last 7 yrs I worked with a Federal client in DC. I am 
> currently located in VA and I am available for full time contract telecommute 
> positions only. 
> 
> If you have any positions pl

See "yrs".

> email me at [EMAIL PROTECTED] or call me at 571-214-1131.

While I know you are looking for a job, publishing your phone number to 
a list that will be picked up by google and other search engines (in the 
HoF archives) may be unwise. But I may be more worried about that kind 
of thing then you are.

> Thanks,
> Reddy

Last name is important. :)

Hope this helps and I hope you get the job you are looking for.

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