CELIX-282: Improves some textual issues on the documentation

Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/celix/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/celix/commit/2a958a31
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/celix/tree/2a958a31
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/celix/diff/2a958a31

Branch: refs/heads/release/celix-2.0.0
Commit: 2a958a310e59a0c876191d2b9ba8881674ad0ef1
Parents: d9fcff8
Author: Pepijn Noltes <pepijnnol...@gmail.com>
Authored: Tue Oct 18 21:27:09 2016 +0200
Committer: Pepijn Noltes <pepijnnol...@gmail.com>
Committed: Tue Oct 18 21:27:09 2016 +0200

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 documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md | 13 ++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/celix/blob/2a958a31/documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md
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diff --git a/documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md 
b/documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md
index b5e4f24..c86dcec 100644
--- a/documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md
+++ b/documents/getting_started/creating_a_simple_bundle.md
@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@ For Apache Celix see [Building And 
Installing](../building/readme.md)
 Download the latest eclipse CDT at 
[http://www.eclipse.org](http://www.eclipse.org) and install it on your system. 
For more information on how the install eclipse on your system consult the 
eclipse documentation. For this getting started guide the luna version of 
eclipse was used 
([linux](http://www.eclipse.org/downloads/download.php?file=/technology/epp/downloads/release/luna/R/eclipse-cpp-luna-R-linux-gtk-x86_64.tar.gz)
 
[mac](http://www.eclipse.org/downloads/download.php?file=/technology/epp/downloads/release/luna/R/eclipse-cpp-luna-R-macosx-cocoa-x86_64.tar.gz)).
 
 ##Apache Celix Bundle project
-Now that Apache Celix and Eclipse is installed, we are ready to create a new 
Apache Celix Bundle project. In this project cmake will be create a singe hello 
world bundle with a deployment configuration for testing the bundle.
+Now that Apache Celix and Eclipse is installed, we are ready to create a new 
Apache Celix Bundle project.
+CMake is used as build tool for Apache Celix projects.
 
 To setup of the project, first create a new project dir to work in:
 
@@ -122,13 +123,14 @@ else()
 endif()
 ```
        
-These CMakeLists.txt files declare that the bundles should be build based on 
the build result (shared library) of the declared sources (in this case the 
private/src/hello_world_activator.c or private/src/HelloWorldActivator.cc 
source). 
+These CMakeLists.txt files declare that the bundles should be build based on 
the build result (shared library) of the declared sources (in this case the 
`private/src/hello_world_activator.c` or `private/src/HelloWorldActivator.cc` 
source). 
 The add_bundle function is an Apache Celix specific CMake extension. 
 The library used for the bundle will also be linked against the dependency 
manager static library. 
 
 
 The Celix framework will install the bundle, load the bundle shared library 
and call the bundle activator entry symbols. These entries need to be 
programmed by the user. 
-Note that in these examples we use the dependency manager libraries (C and C++ 
version) instead of developing a "naked" bundle activator; The dependency 
manager uses a higher abstraction and is more simple to understand and 
maintain. 
+Note that in these examples we use the dependency manager libraries (C and C++ 
version) instead of developing a "vanilla" bundle activator; 
+The dependency manager uses a higher abstraction and is more simple to 
understand and maintain, but not part of the OSGi standard.
 
 The C Bundle Activator:
 ```C
@@ -225,7 +227,8 @@ make all
 #ninja
 ```    
 
-Hopefully you will some some build results scrolling over the screen and 
actual build results in the build directory. There should be a hello_world.zip 
in the bundles/hello_world directory, this the actual bundle. But a bundle on 
its own has no real value, so lets setup a deployment and run the Apache Celix 
framwork with this bundle.
+Hopefully you will some some build results scrolling over the screen and 
actual build results in the build directory. There should be a hello_world.zip 
in the bundles/hello_world directory, this the actual bundle.  
+A bundle on its own has no real value, so lets setup a deployment and run the 
Apache Celix framwork with these bundles.
 
 ###Running 
 
@@ -254,7 +257,7 @@ make -j
 #ninja
 ```    
 
-Now a deploy directory myproject should be available in the deploy directory. 
This directory contains - among other files - the run.sh script. This can be 
used to run the Apache Celix framework with the declared bundles from the 
deploy.cmake.
+Now a deploy directory myproject should be available in the deploy directory. 
This directory contains - among other files - a release.sh script. This can be 
used to setup the required environment variables (like LD_LIBRARY_PATH).
 
 ```bash
 cd ${WS}/myproject-build/deploy/myproject

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