Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base [v3]
> Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. Alexey Ivanov has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional commit since the last revision: Update copyright to 2022 - Changes: - all: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768/files - new: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768/files/0669cdc1..fa2caaec Webrevs: - full: https://webrevs.openjdk.java.net/?repo=jdk=8768=02 - incr: https://webrevs.openjdk.java.net/?repo=jdk=8768=01-02 Stats: 102 lines in 102 files changed: 0 ins; 0 del; 102 mod Patch: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768.diff Fetch: git fetch https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk pull/8768/head:pull/8768 PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base [v2]
On Thu, 19 May 2022 09:38:40 GMT, Kevin Walls wrote: >> Alexey Ivanov has updated the pull request incrementally with seven >> additional commits since the last revision: >> >> - ...set to the values... >> - ...will result in a Zip64 Extra (EXT) header >> - ...in addition to the main attributes... >> - ...and the address of the current archive >> - Merges the stack at the given bci... >> - Returns a single ... >> - ...when a peer shuts down an association. > > OK. I started with serviceability but then went through everything as it's > hard to record what you have/haven't seen in these long reviews. Thank you @kevinjwalls for your suggestions. I've incorporated them. - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base [v2]
On Thu, 19 May 2022 08:47:47 GMT, Kevin Walls wrote:
>> Alexey Ivanov has updated the pull request incrementally with seven
>> additional commits since the last revision:
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>> - ...set to the values...
>> - ...will result in a Zip64 Extra (EXT) header
>> - ...in addition to the main attributes...
>> - ...and the address of the current archive
>> - Merges the stack at the given bci...
>> - Returns a single ...
>> - ...when a peer shuts down an association.
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> src/jdk.jdi/share/classes/com/sun/jdi/ClassType.java line 348:
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>> 346:
>> 347: /**
>> 348: * Returns the single non-abstract {@link Method} visible from
>
> I would think "Returns a single ..." because the implementation returns the
> first match it finds, from possibly many.
I've accepted it, yet I'm still unsure whether ‘a‘ or ‘the’…
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PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base [v2]
> Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. Alexey Ivanov has updated the pull request incrementally with seven additional commits since the last revision: - ...set to the values... - ...will result in a Zip64 Extra (EXT) header - ...in addition to the main attributes... - ...and the address of the current archive - Merges the stack at the given bci... - Returns a single ... - ...when a peer shuts down an association. - Changes: - all: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768/files - new: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768/files/c7e73658..0669cdc1 Webrevs: - full: https://webrevs.openjdk.java.net/?repo=jdk=8768=01 - incr: https://webrevs.openjdk.java.net/?repo=jdk=8768=00-01 Stats: 7 lines in 7 files changed: 0 ins; 0 del; 7 mod Patch: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768.diff Fetch: git fetch https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk pull/8768/head:pull/8768 PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Thu, 19 May 2022 09:31:07 GMT, Kevin Walls wrote: >> Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: >> a/the, an?/an?, the/the… >> >> Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. > > test/jdk/sun/security/tools/jarsigner/OldSig.java line 32: > >> 30: /* >> 31: * See also PreserveRawManifestEntryAndDigest.java for tests with >> arbitrarily >> 32: * formatted individual sections in addition the main attributes tested > > "in addition to the..." +1. - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. The security/crypto parts look good to me. - Marked as reviewed by xuelei (Reviewer). PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. OK. I started with serviceability but then went through everything as it's hard to record what you have/haven't seen in these long reviews. test/jdk/java/net/InterfaceAddress/Equals.java line 81: > 79: /** > 80: * Returns an InterfaceAddress instance with its fields set the values > 81: * specificed. probably a typo for "set to the values specified." - Marked as reviewed by kevinw (Committer). PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. test/jdk/jdk/nio/zipfs/TestLocOffsetFromZip64EF.java line 84: > 82: > 83: /** > 84: * Create a Zip file that will result in an Zip64 Extra (EXT) header "result in a Zip64..." test/jdk/sun/security/tools/jarsigner/OldSig.java line 32: > 30: /* > 31: * See also PreserveRawManifestEntryAndDigest.java for tests with > arbitrarily > 32: * formatted individual sections in addition the main attributes tested "in addition to the..." - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. src/hotspot/share/cds/filemap.cpp line 1914: > 1912: > 1913: // the current value of the pointers to be patched must be within > this > 1914: // range (i.e., must be between the requested base address, and the > of the current archive). "the of the" ? Maybe "..and the address of the current archive", or maybe it was a typo for "and that of the current archive". - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. src/hotspot/share/interpreter/bytecodeUtils.cpp line 186: > 184: static const int _max_cause_detail = 5; > 185: > 186: // Merges the stack the given bci with the given stack. If there "...the stack at the given bci..." - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. src/hotspot/share/opto/graphKit.cpp line 3626: > 3624: // The optional arguments are for specialized use by intrinsics: > 3625: // - If 'extra_slow_test' if not null is an extra condition for the > slow-path. > 3626: // - If 'return_size_val', report the total object size to the caller. "reports the total" - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote:
> Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations:
> a/the, an?/an?, the/the…
>
> Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes.
src/jdk.jdi/share/classes/com/sun/jdi/ClassType.java line 348:
> 346:
> 347: /**
> 348: * Returns the single non-abstract {@link Method} visible from
I would think "Returns a single ..." because the implementation returns the
first match it finds, from possibly many.
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PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. src/jdk.sctp/share/classes/com/sun/nio/sctp/ShutdownNotification.java line 28: > 26: > 27: /** > 28: * Notification emitted when a peers shutdowns the association. Maybe: "...when a peer shuts down an association." (could be "shuts down the association" if there is only ever one, but using "an" looks safe) - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. Marked as reviewed by iris (Reviewer). - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. LGTM for i18n changes. - Marked as reviewed by naoto (Reviewer). PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. Looked at - java.base/.../sun/security - jdk.crypto.* - test/*/com/sun/crypto/provider - test/*/java/lang/SecurityManager - test/*/java/security - test/*/krb5 - test/*/jarsigner and those look fine. - Marked as reviewed by wetmore (Reviewer). PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
Re: RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
On Wed, 18 May 2022 13:27:24 GMT, Alexey Ivanov wrote: > Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: > a/the, an?/an?, the/the… > > Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. Marked as reviewed by lancea (Reviewer). - PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
RFR: 8284191: Replace usages of 'a the' in hotspot and java.base
Replaces usages of articles that follow each other in all combinations: a/the, an?/an?, the/the… Also, I fixed a couple of spelling mistakes. - Commit messages: - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the an' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the an' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the an' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - 8284191: Replace usages of 'the the' in hotspot and java.base - ... and 13 more: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/compare/69ff86a3...c7e73658 Changes: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768/files Webrev: https://webrevs.openjdk.java.net/?repo=jdk=8768=00 Issue: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8284191 Stats: 202 lines in 162 files changed: 0 ins; 11 del; 191 mod Patch: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768.diff Fetch: git fetch https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk pull/8768/head:pull/8768 PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/jdk/pull/8768
