Package: scribes
Version: 0.3.2.8-1
Severity: wishlist

Hello,

currently, the description of Scribes reads:

Description: simple, slim and sleek, yet powerful text editor for GNOME
 Scribes focuses on streamlining your workflow. It does so by ensuring
 common and repetitive operations are intelligently automated. And also
 by eliminating factors that prevent you from focusing on your tasks.
 .
 The result is a text editor that provides a fluid user experience.
 An editor that is easy and fun to use. And an editor that ensures the
 safety of your documents at all times.
 .
  Homepage: http://scribes.sourceforge.net/


I'd suggest a few changes, which result in the following 
description (which sounds a little better for me):

Description: simple, slim and sleek, yet powerful text editor for GNOME
 Scribes focuses on streamlining your workflow. It does so by ensuring
 that common and repetitive operations are intelligently automated and
 also by eliminating factors that prevent you from focusing on your
 tasks.
 .
 The result is a text editor that provides a fluid user experience,
 that is easy and fun to use and that ensures the safety of your
 documents at all times.
 .
  Homepage: http://scribes.sourceforge.net/

I am not a native English speaker myself, so these are just suggestions. 
Please feel free to correct me or ignore this completely.

Thanks,

Eike

-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.21-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash

Versions of packages scribes depends on:
ii  gconf2                       2.18.0.1-3  GNOME configuration database syste
ii  python                       2.4.4-6     An interactive high-level object-o
ii  python-central               0.5.14      register and build utility for Pyt
ii  python-dbus                  0.82.0-1    simple interprocess messaging syst
ii  python-gnome2                2.18.2-1    Python bindings for the GNOME desk
ii  python-gnome2-desktop        2.18.0-2+b1 Python bindings for the GNOME desk
ii  python-gnome2-extras         2.14.3-1    Python bindings for the GNOME desk
ii  python-gtk2                  2.10.6-1    Python bindings for the GTK+ widge
ii  scrollkeeper                 0.3.14-13   A free electronic cataloging syste
ii  yelp                         2.14.3-2    Help browser for GNOME 2

Versions of packages scribes recommends:
ii  python-psyco                  1.5.1-3    python specializing compiler

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