Package: irssi-plugin-xmpp
Version: 0.13-1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

The package description seems a bit awkward to a native English speaker
and "resources" is misspelled. I reviewed the package description and
have some suggested changes.

Thanks,
-Ted
diff -ru irssi-plugin-xmpp-0.13/debian/control 
irssi-plugin-xmpp-0.13-new/debian/control
--- irssi-plugin-xmpp-0.13/debian/control       2007-09-26 16:38:59.000000000 
+1000
+++ irssi-plugin-xmpp-0.13-new/debian/control   2007-09-26 16:48:00.000000000 
+1000
@@ -11,15 +11,12 @@
 Description: XMPP plugin for irssi
  An irssi plugin to connect to the Jabber network, using the XMPP protocol.
  .
- Its aim is to provide a good integration in this text-based irc client and a
- good support of XMPP.
- .
- Current main features are:
+ Its main features are:
   - Sending and receiving messages in irssi's query windows
-  - A roster with contact's ressources tracking (contact list)
-  - Contact management (add, remove, manage subscriptions...)
-  - Contact's JIDs, ressources and commands completion (TAB key)
-  - Multiple accounts support (in different connection)
+  - A roster with contact & resource tracking (contact list)
+  - Contact management (add, remove, manage subscriptions)
+  - Tab completion of commands, JIDs and resources
+  - Support for multiple accounts
   - Unicode support (UTF-8)
   - SSL support
  .

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