Package: playitslowly
Version: 1.3.0-1
Severity: minor

The description for the current package reads:


  Play it slowly is a software to play back audio files at a different
  speed or pitch. It does also allow you to loop over a certain part of
  a file.

  It's intended to help you learn or transcribe songs. It can also play
  videos thanks to GStreamer.

  Play it slowly works with both ALSA and JACK Audio Connection Kit.


Firstly, you want "is software" or "is a piece of software". "Does also
allow" is not idiomatic: "It also allows you..." is better.

Less definite suggestions: I'd probably not contract the "it is" at the
start of the second paragraph and I'd probably write "the JACK Audio
Connection Kit" or just "JACK" (since you don't write out the expansion
of ALSA).

I suppose the following would be a reasonable description:


  Play it slowly is software to play back audio files at a different
  speed or pitch. It also allows you to loop over a certain part of a
  file.

  It's intended to help you learn or transcribe songs. It can also play
  videos thanks to GStreamer.

  Play it slowly works with both ALSA and the JACK Audio Connection Kit.



Rupert

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