Dear Debian maintainer,

On Sunday, August 07, 2011, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for kexec-tools.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Sunday, August 07, 2011. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- kexec-tools.old/debian/kexec-tools.templates        2011-08-06 
09:18:34.346714760 +0200
+++ kexec-tools/debian/kexec-tools.templates    2011-08-25 08:03:28.642783005 
+0200
@@ -1,15 +1,24 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: kexec-tools/load_kexec
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Should kexec-tools handle reboots?
  If you choose this option, a system reboot will trigger a restart
  into a kernel loaded by kexec instead of going through the full
- system bootloader process.
+ system boot loader process.
 
 Template: kexec-tools/use_grub_config
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Should kexec-tools e grub2 config file to load kernel?
- If you choose this option, kexec will read grub2 config file to 
+_Description: Read GRUB configuration file to load the kernel?
+ If you choose this option, kexec will read the GRUB configuration file to
  determine which kernel and options to load for kexec reboot, as opposed
  to what is in /etc/default/kexec.
--- kexec-tools.old/debian/control      2011-08-06 09:18:34.346714760 +0200
+++ kexec-tools/debian/control  2011-08-11 12:59:31.500127506 +0200
@@ -9,13 +9,14 @@
 Package: kexec-tools
 Architecture: i386 amd64 ppc64 powerpc ia64 s390 arm armel
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, debconf
-Description: kexec tool for kexec reboots
- This tool is used to load a kernel in memory and reboot into the kernel
- loaded in memory using the kexec system call.
+Description: tools to support fast kexec reboots
+ This package provides tools to load a kernel into memory and then
+ "reboot" directly into that kernel using the kexec system call,
+ bypassing the normal boot process.
 
 Package: kexec-tools-udeb
 Section: debian-installer
 Architecture: any
 XC-Package-Type: udeb
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: kexec tool for kexec reboots (udeb)
+Description: tools to support fast kexec reboots (udeb)
--- kexec-tools.old/debian/changelog    2011-08-06 09:18:34.346714760 +0200
+++ kexec-tools/debian/changelog        2011-09-11 07:11:41.656436053 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,21 @@
+kexec-tools (1:2.0.2-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #639226
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Slovak (Slavko).  Closes: #639305
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #637753
+  * Swedish (Martin Bagge / brother).  Closes: #640049
+  * French (Steve Petruzzello).  Closes: #640092
+  * Czech (Miroslav Kure).  Closes: #640218
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #640408
+  * Portuguese (Rui Branco).  Closes: #640858
+  * Dutch; (Jeroen Schot).  Closes: #640989
+  * Spanish; (CamaleĆ³n).  Closes: #640994
+  * German (Helge Kreutzmann).  Closes: #641143
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Thu, 25 Aug 2011 08:10:00 +0200
+
 kexec-tools (1:2.0.2-2) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Fixed the problem with --no-undefined option being used for gcc. 

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