Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20120509 Severity: minor Hello Raphaël, I've just completed chapter 9: what follows is my list of suggestions, grouped by relevant section, as usual.
Section 9.2.2. Secure Remote Login: SSH --------------------------------------- | The SSH (Secured Shel) protocol First of all, I thought that SSH standed for "secure shell", rather than "secured shell" (ah, I see that this has already been reported as bug #673078...). Moreover, if you want to highlight the letters that form the acronym, I think you should write "Secure SHell". Section 9.2.3. Using Remote Graphical Desktops ---------------------------------------------- After some struggling, I think I probably understood the "VNC over SSH" box. However a little figure to represent the suggested ssh forwarding command would really help to clarify this box. Figure 9.2 (Forwarding a local port with SSH) represents the general case; another figure representing the specific case ( $ ssh -L localhost:5901:localhost:5900 -N -T machine ) should be added. Section 9.3. Managing Rights ---------------------------- | Each file or folder has specific permissions I personally dislike the term "folder" when used to mean "directory". To me, it really feels like Microsoft-jargon... I admit that this is above all a matter of tastes, but I would s/folder/directory/ Section 9.9. Quotas ------------------- | If the filesystem was created with a block-size of 1 kilobyte, a | block contains 1024 bytes from the same file. I would suggest using the correct prefix: s/1 kilobyte/1 kibibyte/ since, as you surely know, 1 kilobyte = 1000 byte , while 1 kibibyte = 1024 byte The same reasoning applies to the vocabulary box titled "Blocks and inodes". Section 9.11.2. The Naming Problem ---------------------------------- Typo? s/on subsequents boots/on subsequent boots/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
