Package: libmm-glib0
Version: 1.0.0-4
Severity: minor

The extended description has a few minor issues:

The parenthesis "(GSM, CDMA, UMTS, ...)" should either lose the last comma ("(GSM, CDMA, 
UMTS...)") or replace the ellipsis with "etcetera". It's probably best to move it at the end 
of the sentence too.

"modem manager" shouldn't have a space.

It is preferable to use full sentences in extended descriptions.

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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com


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