Bug#760900: libteam: improving long description

2014-09-16 Thread Dmitry Smirnov
Hi Filipus, I committed more of your suggestions here: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/commit/?id=3ffb0d479e10103b6f42c96713fd80654a559669 On Mon, 15 Sep 2014 23:10:40 Filipus Klutiero wrote: The noun phrase Linux kernel 3.3 or higher is missing a determiner.

Bug#760900: libteam: improving long description

2014-09-15 Thread Dmitry Smirnov
On Mon, 15 Sep 2014 00:56:35 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thank you. Here are some more issues I notice: libteam is a library for communication with kernel module (Netlink).| The noun phrase kernel module is missing a determiner. Perhaps this should read with the Netlink kernel module. Also,

Bug#760900: libteam: improving long description

2014-09-15 Thread Filipus Klutiero
Hi Dmitry, On 2014-09-15 02:02, Dmitry Smirnov wrote: On Mon, 15 Sep 2014 00:56:35 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thank you. Here are some more issues I notice: libteam is a library for communication with kernel module (Netlink).| The noun phrase kernel module is missing a determiner. Perhaps this

Bug#760900: libteam: improving long description

2014-09-14 Thread Dmitry Smirnov
On Sun, 14 Sep 2014 17:51:33 Filipus Klutiero wrote: The noun phrase bonding driver is missing a determiner such as the (this could read unlike the bonding driver). Also, I would recommend adding a comma after that. Thanks. Description updated yet again, I hope it is all good now:

Bug#760900: libteam: improving long description

2014-09-14 Thread Filipus Klutiero
Hi Dmitry, On 2014-09-14 21:50, Dmitry Smirnov wrote: On Sun, 14 Sep 2014 17:51:33 Filipus Klutiero wrote: The noun phrase bonding driver is missing a determiner such as the (this could read unlike the bonding driver). Also, I would recommend adding a comma after that. Thanks. Description