Source: linux
Version: 3.16.7-2
Severity: minor

This issue affects several (I presume all) extended descriptions of stock 
kernel packages. I will use linux-image-3.16.0-4-amd64 as an example. The 
description starts with:
The Linux kernel 3.16 and modules for use on PCs with AMD64, Intel 64 or
VIA Nano processors.

"The Linux kernel 3.16" should be replaced with something like:

1. "The Linux kernel (version 3.16)"
2. "Version 3.16 of the Linux kernel"
3. "Version 3.16 of Linux"
4. "Linux (version 3.16)"
5. Simply "Linux 3.16"

I would recommend either 1, 4 or 5.


By the way, this sentence is misleading. The x86-64 flavor can be used on quite 
a broad range of hardware, including servers.

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Filipus Klutiero
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