Package: xorg-server
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Monday, August 27, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for xorg-server.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading xorg-server with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Monday, September 17, 2007, when 
I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Monday, October 08, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or 
changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around <DAY25>, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- xorg-server.old/debian/xprint-common.templates      2007-08-27 
15:15:18.104056699 +0200
+++ xorg-server/debian/xprint-common.templates  2007-09-14 07:38:44.617667575 
+0200
@@ -1,12 +1,21 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: xprint-common/default_printer_resolution
 Type: string
 Default: 600
-_Description: Default printer resolution
- By default Xprint assumes a printer resolution of 600dpi. This should be fine
- for the majority of printers today.
+_Description: Default printer resolution:
+ By default, Xprint assumes a printer resolution of 600 dpi. This should be
+ well suited for the majority of printers.
  .
- On certain 1200dpi printers, however, the image might appear squashed in the
- corner of the page, or it might be blown up too large on 300dpi printers. If
- you are experiencing these kinds of printing problems, you may want to set
+ On certain 1200 dpi printers, however, the image might appear squashed in the
+ corner of the page, or it might be blown up too large on 300 dpi printers. If
+ you are experiencing such printing problems, you may want to set
  the default printer resolution to a more appropriate value. See
  /usr/share/doc/xprint-common/README.printing-problems.gz for more details.
--- xorg-server.old/debian/control      2007-08-27 15:15:18.104056699 +0200
+++ xorg-server/debian/control  2007-09-14 07:39:25.615536084 +0200
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 Conflicts: xserver-xorg (<< 6.8.2-38), xserver-xfree86 (<< 1:7.0.0), 
xserver-xorg-video, xserver-common, fglrx-driver (<< 8.37.6)
 Replaces: xserver-xorg (<< 6.8.2-38), xserver-xfree86 (<< 1:7.0.0), 
xserver-common
 Provides: xserver
-Description: X.Org X server -- core server
+Description: X.Org X server - core server
  The X.Org X server is an X server for several architectures and operating
  systems, which is derived from the XFree86 4.x series of X servers.
  .
@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
  .
  The X.Org server either needs fonts installed on the local host, or needs to
  know of a remote hosts that provides font services (with xfs, for instance).
- The former means that fonts packages are mandatory.  The latter means that
- font packages may be gratuitous.  To err on the side of caution, install at
+ The former means that fonts packages are mandatory. The latter means that
+ font packages may be gratuitous. To err on the side of caution, install at
  least the xfonts-base, xfonts-100dpi or xfonts-75dpi, and xfonts-scalable
  packages.
  .
@@ -61,13 +61,12 @@
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xserver-xorg-dev
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
-Description: X.Org X server -- development files
+Description: X.Org X server - development files
  This package provides development files for the X.Org ('Xorg') X server.
  This is not quite the same as the DDK (Driver Development Kit) from the
  XFree86 4.x and X.Org 6.7, 6.8 and 6.9 series of servers; it provides
@@ -81,28 +80,26 @@
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xdmx
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Distributed Multihead X server
+Description: distributed multihead X server
  Xdmx is a proxy X server that uses one or more other X servers as its
- display device(s).  It provides multi-head X functionality for displays that
- might be located on different machines.  Xdmx functions as a front-end X 
server
- that acts as a proxy to a set of back-end X servers.  All of the visible
- rendering is passed to the back-end X servers.  Clients connect to the Xdmx
+ display device(s). It provides multi-head X functionality for displays that
+ might be located on different machines. Xdmx functions as a front-end X server
+ that acts as a proxy to a set of back-end X servers. All of the visible
+ rendering is passed to the back-end X servers. Clients connect to the Xdmx
  front-end, and everything appears as it would in a regular multi-head
- configuration.  If Xinerama is enabled (e.g., with +xinerama on the command
+ configuration. If Xinerama is enabled (e.g., with +xinerama on the command
  line), the clients see a single large screen.
  .
  More information about X.Org can be found at:
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xdmx-tools
 Architecture: any
@@ -116,26 +113,24 @@
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xnest
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: Nested X server
  Xnest is a nested X server that simply relays all its requests to another
- X server, where it runs as a client.  This means that it appears as another
- window in your current X session.  Xnest relies upon its parent X server
+ X server, where it runs as a client. This means that it appears as another
+ window in your current X session. Xnest relies upon its parent X server
  for font services.
  .
- Use of the Xephyr X server instead of Xnest is recommended.
+ It is now mostly superseded by the Xephyr X server.
  .
  More information about X.Org can be found at:
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xvfb
 Architecture: any
@@ -143,8 +138,8 @@
 Recommends: xbase-clients, xfonts-base
 Description: Virtual Framebuffer 'fake' X server
  Xvfb provides an X server that can run on machines with no display hardware
- and no physical input devices.  It emulates a dumb framebuffer using virtual
- memory.  The primary use of this server was intended to be server testing,
+ and no physical input devices. It emulates a dumb framebuffer using virtual
+ memory. The primary use of this server was intended to be server testing,
  but other novel uses for it have been found, including testing clients
  against unusual depths and screen configurations, doing batch processing with
  Xvfb as a background rendering engine, load testing, as an aid to porting the
@@ -154,23 +149,22 @@
  .
  This package also contains a convenience script called xvfb-run which
  simplifies the automated execution of X clients in a virtual server
- environment.  This convenience script requires the use of the xauth
+ environment. This convenience script requires the use of the xauth
  program.
  .
  More information about X.Org can be found at:
  <URL:http://xorg.freedesktop.org>
  <URL:http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/xorg>
  .
- This module can be found as the module 'xserver/xorg' at
- :pserver:[EMAIL PROTECTED]:/cvs/xorg
+ This package is built from the X.org xserver module.
 
 Package: xserver-xephyr
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: xbase-clients
-Description: Next Generation Nested X Server
- xserver-xephyr is an X server that can be run inside another X server,
- much like xnest. xephyr though, is based on the kdrive X server, and as a
+Description: nested X server
+ Xephyr is an X server that can be run inside another X server,
+ much like xnest. It is based on the kdrive X server, and as a
  result it supports newer extensions than xnest, including render and
  composite.
 
@@ -179,14 +173,14 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, xprint-common, libxfont1 (>= 
1:1.1)
 Recommends: xprint-utils
 Conflicts: xprt (<= 4.3.0.dfsg.1-10)
-Description: Xprint - the X11 print system (binary)
+Description: X11 print system (binary)
  Xprint is an advanced printing system which enables X11 applications
- to use devices like printers, FAX or create documents in formats like
+ to use devices like printers, fax or create documents in formats like
  PostScript, PDF, PCL, etc.
  .
  This package provides Xprt, the Xprint server compiled from
- xprint.mozdev.org, an X.org subproject.  Xprint provides superior support
- for printing from mozilla, including non-latin characters and MathML.
+ xprint.mozdev.org, an X.org subproject. Xprint provides superior support
+ for printing from Mozilla, including non-Latin characters and MathML.
  TrueType fonts are supported.
  .
  Xprint uses ttf2pt1 internally for some font support.
@@ -197,12 +191,12 @@
 Recommends: xprint, xfonts-base
 Conflicts: xprt-common
 Replaces: xprt-common
-Description: Xprint - the X11 print system (configuration files)
+Description: X11 print system (configuration files)
  Xprint is an advanced printing system which enables X11 applications
  to use devices like printers, FAX or create documents in formats like
  PostScript, PDF, PCL, etc.
  .
- This package provides the configuration and postscript definition files
+ This package provides the configuration and Postscript definition files
  required to run Xprt, the Xprint server. Xprt is provided by xprint.
 
 Package: xserver-xorg-core-dbg
@@ -216,5 +210,5 @@
  The X.Org server supports most modern graphics hardware from most vendors,
  and supersedes all XFree86 X servers.
  .
- This package provides debugging symbols for the Xorg X server and associated
+ This package provides debugging symbols for the X.org X server and associated
  modules.

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