Dear Debian maintainer,

On Thursday, January 03, 2008, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for phamm.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Thursday, January 03, 2008. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- phamm.old/debian/phamm.templates    2007-12-29 08:25:51.425700293 +0100
+++ phamm/debian/phamm.templates        2008-01-21 07:43:10.048402036 +0100
@@ -1,51 +1,58 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: phamm/ldap-server
 Type: string
-_description: LDAP server host address:
- Please enter the host name or the address of the LDAP server you want to
- connect to.
 Default: 127.0.0.1
+_Description: LDAP server host:
+ Please enter the host name or IP address of the LDAP server that
+ Phamm should connect to.
 
 Template: phamm/ldap-basedn
 Type: string
-_description: Distinguished name of the search base:
- Please enter the distinguished name of the LDAP search base. Many sites
+Default: dc=example,dc=org
+_Description: Distinguished Name of the search base:
+ Please enter the Distinguished Name (DN) of the LDAP search base. Many sites
  use the components of their domain names for this purpose. For example,
- the domain "example.com" would use "dc=example,dc=com" as the
- distinguished name of the search base.
-Default: dc=example,dc=tld
+ the domain "example.org" would use "dc=example,dc=org".
 
 Template: phamm/ldap-binddn
 Type: string
-_description: Login dn for the LDAP server:
- Enter the name of the account that will be used to log in to the LDAP
- server. If you chose a form based authentication this will be the default
- login dn. In this case you can also leave it empty, if you do not want a
- default one.
 Default: cn=manager,dc=example,dc=tld
+_Description: Login DN for the LDAP server:
+ Please enter the Distinguished Name of the account that will be used
+ to log in to the LDAP server. If you use form-based authentication
+ this will be the default login DN. In this case leaving it empty will
+ prevent the creation of a default login DN.
 
 Template: phamm/ldap-bindpw
-Type: string
-_description: Login password for the LDAP server:
- Enter the password that will be used to log in to the LDAP server.
+Type: password
 Default: secret
+_Description: Login password for the LDAP server:
+ Please enter the password that will be used to log in to the LDAP server.
 
 Template: phamm/plugins
 Type: multiselect
-_description: Which plugins you want Phamm supports:
-_Choices: mail, alias, ftp, person, proxy
-Default: mail
+__Choices: mail, alias, ftp, person, proxy
+_Default: mail
+_Description: Plugins to be supported by Phamm:
 
 Template: phamm/reconfigure-webserver
 Type: multiselect
-_description: Web server which will be reconfigured automatically:
+Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
+Default: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
+_Description: Web server to reconfigure automatically:
  Phamm supports any web server that PHP does, but this automatic
  configuration process only supports Apache.
-_Choices: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
-Default: apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, apache2
 
 Template: phamm/restart-webserver
 Type: boolean
-_description: Restart of your webserver(s)?
- Remember that in order to apply the changes your webserver(s) has/have to
- be restarted.
 Default: true
+_Description: Restart the webserver(s)?
+ In order to apply the changes, the webserver(s) must be restarted.
--- phamm.old/debian/control    2007-12-29 08:25:51.425700293 +0100
+++ phamm/debian/control        2008-01-18 21:00:04.604409186 +0100
@@ -8,15 +8,20 @@
 Package: phamm
 Architecture: all
 Depends: apache2 | httpd, php5-ldap | php4-ldap, libapache2-mod-php5 | 
libapache-mod-php5 | php5-cgi | php5 | libapache2-mod-php4 | libapache-mod-php4 
| php4 (>= 4.1.0) | php4-cgi, debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: a PHP front-end to manage virtual services using LDAP
- Phamm provides an useful PHP front-end with multi-role access to manage
- virtual services using a LDAP backend. Phamm works with a plug-in system,
- the typical service is a mail server with virtual mail domain support
- but other plug-ins are available (ftp, proxy...). It is easy create or
- customize existing plug-ins for Phamm using XML descriptor files.
+Description: PHP front-end to manage virtual services with LDAP - main package
+ Phamm is a useful PHP front-end providing role-based administrative
+ access to virtual services using an LDAP back-end.
+ .
+ Phamm works with a plug-in system: the typical service is a mail
+ server with virtual mail domain support, but plug-ins are also
+ available for FTP, web proxying, and so on. The use of XML descriptor
+ files simplifies creating new plugins or customizing existing ones.
 
 Package: phamm-ldap
 Architecture: all
 Depends: gnarwl
-Description: Phamm LDAP backend files
- Phamm backend require own phamm.schema and custom ACL.
+Description: PHP front-end to manage virtual services with LDAP - back-end 
files
+ Phamm is a useful PHP front-end providing role-based administrative
+ access to virtual services using an LDAP back-end.
+ .
+ This package provides Phamm's own LDAP schema file and custom ACL.
--- phamm.old/debian/changelog  2007-12-29 08:25:51.425700293 +0100
+++ phamm/debian/changelog      2008-02-10 12:43:07.773239581 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,21 @@
+phamm (0.5.9-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #461838
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #462657
+  * Norwegian Bokmål. Closes: #462808
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #462912
+  * Galician. Closes: #462995
+  * Finnish. Closes: #463940
+  * German. Closes: #464185
+  * Czech. Closes: #464426
+  * Dutch. Closes: #464537
+  * Russian. Closes: #464565
+  * French. Closes: #465049
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sun, 10 Feb 2008 12:43:07 +0100
+
 phamm (0.5.9-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Initial release (Closes: #440290)

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