mike-jumper commented on code in PR #142:
URL: https://github.com/apache/guacamole-website/pull/142#discussion_r1558064900
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_companies/bitchief.md:
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+---
+title: Bitchief Technology Services Pvt. Ltd.
+logo: /images/companies/bitchief.png
+location: https://bitchief.com/agsupport
+---
+
+Bitchief Technology Services specializes in software engineering, networking,
and data center setup and operations, with a focus on Apache Guacamole
implementations. We tailor Guacamole for seamless integration, ensuring
comprehensive support for our clients' needs.
Review Comment:
> We tailor Guacamole for seamless integration, ensuring comprehensive
support for our clients' needs.
1. This should be rephrased in the third person (it's Bitchief stating this,
not Guacamole). Just changing things from "we" to "they" might be enough.
2. The phrase "ensuring comprehensive support" is not neutral.
I'd suggest rephrasing to:
> They provide support and development services to tailor Guacamole for the
customer's needs.
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