[IxDA Discuss] Could use some eyes on this chart

2010-01-27 Thread Tom DellAringa
I've been working on this chart for awhile that has to do with my comic. It supposed to explain some large events that happened in the story via time travel. I could really use some more sets of eyes on this thing, because it's driving me crazy! It's also an exercise in information design for me,

Re: [IxDA Discuss] Could use some eyes on this chart

2010-01-27 Thread Tom DellAringa
Thanks for the responses! I realize I made a couple mistakes when I changed some things in the alternate timeline. I wasn't sure if the circle would confuse people or not, it seems half and half. I'm open to suggestions as to what my help indicate a break from the old and a creation of a new time

Re: [IxDA Discuss] Could use some eyes on this chart

2010-01-28 Thread Tom Dellaringa
If anyone knows how to remove a post in a thread - Jonathan didn't want his email on the site. I can't seem to do it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Posted from the new ixda.org http://www.ixda.org/discuss?post=48697 _

Re: [IxDA Discuss] Could use some eyes on this chart

2010-02-01 Thread Tom DellAringa
Thanks for the comments I haven't responded to yet. I'm working on revising it with many of these things in mind. @Oliamwright - can't see any comments at that link :( . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Posted from the new ixda.org http://www.ixda.org/discuss?po

Re: [IxDA Discuss] Could use some eyes on this chart

2010-02-02 Thread Tom DellAringa
Took a lot of your comments into account, as well as some of my own thoughts. I tried to vastly simplify things. Here is an update, be glad to hear any thoughts. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/48702/timeline2.jpg . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Posted from the new ix