Re: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Henrik Levkowetz
Hi Dave, Responding only to the xml2rfc issue, not to the document content: On 2018-09-26 21:24, Dave Crocker wrote: > On 9/24/2018 6:16 AM, Dave Crocker wrote: >>> >>> + Those registered by IANA in the "Service Name and Transport >>> Protocol Port Number Registry [RFC6335]"

Re: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Dave Crocker
On 9/24/2018 6:16 AM, Dave Crocker wrote:     +  Those registered by IANA in the "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry [RFC6335]" Move the end quote after Registry. ok.  Good catch. Interesting. Just discovered that this probably qualifies as a bug in the

Re: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Dave Crocker
Hi. Thanks for the detailed comments. Some responses... On 9/24/2018 3:00 AM, Francesca Palombini wrote: The use of underscored node names is specific to each RRTYPE that is being scoped. As an non-expert in the area, I would have appreciate a ref to a document introducing RRTYPE.

[DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Francesca Palombini
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.