In your previous mail you wrote:
> After a reading, I felt that this document needs the following:
>
> * Editing for clarity of sentences
=> I agree until the text comes from original RFCs (i.e. you are
17 year too late) or can only be clarified at the margin.
> * Addressing insufficient
Hi Francis, Stephen
After a reading, I felt that this document needs the following:
* Editing for clarity of sentences
* Addressing insufficient protocol specification
Review follows that suggests changes. Some are nitpicking, but changes
are needed to be pedantically correct.
>This
