[DNSOP] draft-jabley-dnssec-trust-anchor-00 -- a quick review

2010-09-30 Thread Alfred Hönes
I've taken a look at draft-jabley-dnssec-trust-anchor-00 and have a couple of comments -- mostly editorial in nature. The items below follow a linear walk-through, independent of any perceived severity. (1) Abstract -- nit (punctuation) For improved readability, I suggest to insert a comma in

Re: [DNSOP] draft-jabley-dnssec-trust-anchor-00 -- a quick review

2010-09-30 Thread Joe Abley
Hi Alfred, On 2010-09-30, at 09:29, Alfred HÎnes wrote: I've taken a look at draft-jabley-dnssec-trust-anchor-00 and have a couple of comments -- mostly editorial in nature. Many thanks for the review. I have made changes based on your editorial observations, and my co-author is working on