> On Aug 27, 2023, at 3:47 PM, Erik Kline via Datatracker
> wrote:
>
> ## Nits
>
> ### S1.2
>
> * "only exacerbated" -> "further exacerbated"?
>
> Use of "only" here might be misread.
>
> ### S2.2
>
> * s/2001:DB8:1::/2001:db8:1::/g
>
> in accordance with RFC 5952 section 4.3
>
Reviewer: James Gannon
Review result: Ready
Hi Folks,
I am the assigned DNSDIR reviewer for this draft.
Thank you for a well-written draft that appears to be very comprehensive
Some very minor comments that are non-blocking.
Section 1:
Personal Preference: The intro section seems to be a little
