Re: [DNSOP] WGLC draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal

2018-02-13 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Sorry, I forgot one additional comment. While there seems not be a solid definition of what the “Updates” means in the RFC header, it always seems to me that “Updates” means you are changing something in those documents, rather than just extending them with new capabilities within the original

[DNSOP] WGLC draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal

2018-02-13 Thread Bernie Volz (volz)
Hi: I have reviewed the document. In general, it is well written and ready to be advanced, though there are some nits that the authors should review and consider: Section 1: Not sure why Stateful is capitalized in the following line: transport protocol. Each Stateful operation is communicated