Hi:
I have reviewed the document. In general, it is well written and ready to be
advanced, though there are some nits that the authors should review and
consider:
Section 1: Not sure why Stateful is capitalized in the following line:
transport protocol. Each Stateful operation is communicated
Sorry, I forgot one additional comment.
While there seems not be a solid definition of what the “Updates” means in the
RFC header, it always seems to me that “Updates” means you are changing
something in those documents, rather than just extending them with new
capabilities within the original
